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A Love Letter

My thoughts burn me Your passion within Is a hollow furnace My mouth of expression is shut For your beauty stuns me These thumb and finger, my saviour Or this pen, a messiah I burn to the bones. My sleep watches every night At my awoken wide eyes. What a mockery of repose! I fear my strange emptiness And time is of the essence. I am stolen away Far into your lost My only compass, your heart. Please, delay not Kick start this love cart For your heart I am aimed Save me, I suffocate From an intense killing feeling Written you my heart I am writing you again Summed up in three words Eight letters... I love you.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 6/1/2013 2:39:00 PM
Goodness, CONGRATS on your romantic win! ;-) ~SKAT~
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Goodness Lanre
Date: 6/2/2013 1:11:00 PM
Thanks SKAT
Date: 6/1/2013 1:53:00 PM
Quite an intense piece here Goodness, well worth its placement..'
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Goodness Lanre
Date: 6/2/2013 1:12:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 6/1/2013 10:08:00 AM
Goodness,, CONGRATULATIONS :-)* Thank you for the nice and sweet romantic poem... pin points the watering passion thirst I seek. Always & Forever..... PD
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Goodness Lanre
Date: 6/2/2013 1:13:00 PM
LInda, THanks

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