A Love Declared


“I love you since without love I'm nothing.”
                                   Quote _ by Poet 
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Slowly, we stroll languidly along the rill’s banks,
     Toward the oldest mighty oak, we slowly walk,
How gladly I relive all my love dreams with thanks.
     We sit on a bench, my heart I slowly unlock.

A soft light breeze gently ruffles her sable hair,
     I look into her dark eyes shining in wonder.
Symbolic glory of her luscious mighty flair.
     Sincere love so deep can never be a blunder.

Come dearest into the comfort of my warm arms,
     You know me well by now my sweet, my only love,
Come to me, you need not feel excessive alarms.
     Loyalty I swear before the Good God above.

Caress each other by enchanting tranquil air
     I have great trust that our great love always so sweet.
I kneel, hold your hands and have but one long prayer.
     Our marriage will soon bloom, be thoroughly complete.

          Slowly, we stroll languidly along the rill's banks,
          A soft light breeze gently ruffles her sable hair,
          Come dearest into the comfort of my warm arms,
          Caress each other by enchanting tranquil air.


30 November 2020

Placed 1

My Created Form Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Constance La France
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La France Avatar
December 15, 2020 at 4:02 PM
Victor, congratulations on your win in my Created Form- Rhyme4-Mix Contest with this excellent poem, I like your quote too _Constance
Goldsmith Avatar
December 15, 2020 at 1:40 PM
Congratulations on your win. A "wonderful" quote and write. Enjoy your win with blessings.....................
Y. Avatar
December 13, 2020 at 6:59 PM
Hi Victor, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on your 1st place win:-) Alexis
Eslinger Avatar
December 12, 2020 at 12:38 PM
Victor, my first read of your poetry is a lavish one. Beautiful expression of feelings that go beyond words. Deep love, reminded me of my Devotion poems written for my husband.
De Beaulieu Avatar
December 12, 2020 at 8:44 AM
Hello Victor, Victor, this such a romantic poem. I read this poem several times. Enjoy your day my friend.
De Beaulieu Avatar
December 12, 2020 at 2:19 PM
Hello Victor, I hope you do to. Enjoy your evening m
Buhagiar Avatar
December 12, 2020 at 10:11 AM
Thank you. I hope I'll get a placement.
Proxenos Avatar
December 4, 2020 at 10:25 AM
My friend this write is reserved for a win! It is almost as if you have recalled a love from the past and offer her a world of love. Well penned Victor, Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Bayles Avatar
December 3, 2020 at 7:43 PM
I like the rhyme very much and the depth of the love in this poem.
Dietrich Avatar
December 1, 2020 at 4:42 PM
very pretty and romantic. I think the key is to first come up with the lines at the bottom and organize the poem from there . Great job!
Riabi Dziri Avatar
December 1, 2020 at 3:10 AM
We unlock the heart and open wide the mind to a so beautiful poetry dripping with sweet nourishing love in an enchanting Nature setting! Every single pulsating heart would dream of such a love declaration! You made a wish, a dream so true in your amazing poetry, Victor! An immense delight reading a poetry deserving the honour of an outshining win! My deepest regards and blessings.
Robinson Jr. Avatar
November 30, 2020 at 11:59 PM
This charming poem glows w/love supreme, Victor. Ever the elegant quill Romantic are you, Sir Lovealot. Real Goodie passion poetry! Love and peace forever.
Hawkins Avatar
November 30, 2020 at 10:32 PM
A very lovely Poem. Thank you, Victor. Good Luck in the contest
Buehler Avatar
November 30, 2020 at 8:52 PM
Your verse is so wonderfully rich in imagery and romance. Such pleasurable reading! :)
Crabtree Avatar
November 30, 2020 at 11:07 AM
A beautiful love poem, Victor. I enjoyed reading it :)
Roper Avatar
November 30, 2020 at 9:44 AM
I love it, so very romantic with great imagery and flow. Hugs
Y. Avatar
November 30, 2020 at 7:06 AM
WoW!Victor, This is so romantic. I enjoyed reading your poems of love and etc. Thanks for taking me on such a lovely “ walk.” Best wishes in the contest. Have a wonderful day my friend:-) Alexis
Pandit Avatar
November 30, 2020 at 5:42 AM
Richly romantic poem, Victor--love flows beautifully in every verse. As always, your creativity shines in this tender write.
One Avatar
November 30, 2020 at 5:28 AM
You do like to go on a romantic walk, be it a romantic walk in word.. A lovely poem Victor..
Rodrigues Avatar
November 30, 2020 at 5:28 AM
A beautiful love story...one worth reminiscing! God bless!
Kendrick Avatar
November 30, 2020 at 3:59 AM
Ahhh!! Romantic and descriptive work. Good imagery. Reads like a good contender for the contest. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
Andresen Avatar
November 30, 2020 at 2:50 AM
- A lovely poem for the contest Victor, good luck :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Cunningham Avatar
November 30, 2020 at 1:26 AM
Nothing beats a romantic walk, another well written verse from your romantic pen Victor. Hope your week goes well. Tom
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