Mystic Rose Rose Poet Couplet

A Love Beyond Compare

Words By: Melancholy Of Innocence 
A place where love awakens with silent truth un-binding 

A breath a speechless word whispered by an eye's caress
anchored deep within inside my naked soul's undress.  
Here lies the force of my love, in truth I must confess,  

I am a butterfly in flight, a rose drenched in morning dew
awakened by your innocence I cannot help but love you
Like the flowers need the rain, I need you too 

One touch one blink and this moment turns to air   
softer than perfume gentler than a whisper barely there
Like stars of heaven, you're beyond compare !!!

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Joseph P. DiMino June 17, 2025 at 4:28 AM Very beautiful, Vie; forever young. Blessings my friend.

Victor Buhagiar June 16, 2025 at 9:23 AM What an excellent love poem, Vienna. Even in my old age, I can feel the vibes. Hugs. Mystic Rose Rose June 16, 2025 at 12:59 PM No matter how old we get we always make room for romance, in our hearts Victor, I think we need tender moments at any age, don't you ?

Abdullah Alhemaidy June 15, 2025 at 3:47 PM Sweet romantic read! Mystic Rose Rose June 15, 2025 at 6:46 PM Grateful for your comment dear ABdullah

Darlene De Beaulieu June 15, 2025 at 11:01 AM Hello mystic Rose, Rose, I found it to be romantic. Hugs. /Darlene/ Darlene De Beaulieu June 16, 2025 at 10:15 AM Hello Mystic Rose, Rose, hyes love can be the sweetest thing. Hugs. /Darlene/ Mystic Rose Rose June 15, 2025 at 6:46 PM Yes indeed love can be the sweetness of life, thanks for commenting

Beryl Edmonds June 15, 2025 at 8:03 AM That’s so lovely, the eyes say it all, when in love one falls… Beryl Mystic Rose Rose June 15, 2025 at 6:46 PM Yes they do Beryl, thank you for leaving a comment ,