a lot to giveaway

…….a lot to giveaway

Nothing is sweeter than restored faith,
as too, the restored hotplate, the  crashed computer
now renewed by the turn of a screw.
The electrician, the technician who overthrew such
arrogant technology, and me faithless, yet

I remember, time standing still, eternal,
 Summer’s afternoons,  in boarding school
left with only paper, scissors and glue and
 the enchanted worlds that grew

Childhood is a lot,
 too much to giveaway for this
complicated adulthood, never to find that child
 the little lost pilgrim –
 her inventive-ness.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 4/30/2014 9:29:00 PM
HA GOOD ONE SUZANNE, this is a sweet win:) Congratulations, <3 always ~SKAT~ <3
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Date: 4/26/2014 6:54:00 PM
OH MY. I love this one, Suz!!!! How I feel sometimes in this new age myself. And I see you got a win too. Big congrats to you, dear.
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Date: 4/26/2014 8:19:00 AM
Nice seeing you on my newest winning list Suz, ,Congratulations. <3 Thank you so much for supporting my contest. If you like, -stop by my latest blog "Dinner Date" Enjoy the tiny tribute to all the winning poems. Here's the link, just in case you're one of the new poets. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_blogs/blog_detail.aspx?BlogID=22220&PoetID=18720 ***Have a Nice Day*** LINDA
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Date: 4/19/2014 8:44:00 AM
A small turn of the mind and our inner child is rediscovered. You will recognize her by the accompanying laughter. I enjoyed your poem.
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Date: 4/19/2014 5:29:00 AM
I agree, childhood is precious. We may have to grow older and grow up but we should never put away our childish wonder. I love the line "I remember time standing still" Didn't it seem like we were always waiting for something and it took forever to arrive?
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Date: 4/18/2014 8:00:00 AM
Wow, this is what all of us need to hold on to. It is nice though to have those little things fixed.
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