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A LOT OF NONSENSE

I was sitting in my room, Looking at the stars, When all of a sudden, I thought I saw Mars, I went out of the house, And looked all around, I got into my rocket ship, Straight off the ground. Milky Way Dairy, Here I come, My pockets are full, To spend on my tum. Oh, gosh how many People are here, Guess I’ll have to queue, That’s pretty clear I got out of my ship, And saw the rotator, I turned and saw a Wow kind of waiter, A strange looking alien, And laden with shakes, And to my relief, I also see choc. Flakes! The stools are actually , Floating in mid-air, And the waiters mingle Around, with such flair. I say to the waiter I’ll Have a Sundae, Oh Never mind, Make that a Monday! What a menu this is, And oh what a choice, After spending my money I’ll have no voice! But truly folks, The Milky Way is a treat, And you come by Rocket ship, Such a cool feat! Take the family there, And on arrival you’ll find, A Drive-thru and menu That’s One of a kind! So first take a left, And then a sharp right, And the Milky way Dairy, Is almost in sight! And there in the skies, And amongst all the stars, Lies a dream world of Sundaes, Flakes and Milky bars. I entered this contest yesterday as a re-post but noticed today it was not on my list of poems so did the necessary. Re-entry from a posted poem from APRIL 2019 POEM COMPETITION : Nonsense Rhyme Poetry Contest Sponsor : Charles Messina 2021/09/12

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Date: 9/25/2021 7:04:00 AM
Here is something light-weight, fun and entertaining! I loved the read. Cute, imaginative and absolutely uplifting. I needed the smile this gave me, light-weight has its purpose in our poetry world. I enjoyed this VERY MUCH - just as I'll enjoy the chocolate eclairs I keep hidden! Life is sweet ... CayCay
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Date: 9/20/2021 11:36:00 AM
Sounds like a wonderful dream world to me, Jennifer!! And thank you again for your enthusiastic comments on 'Raise 'em Right!' Blessings, Gershon
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Date: 9/19/2021 11:53:00 AM
what a fun poem and now i am craving chocolate - a galaxy bar for me or a Star bar lol:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/19/2021 11:39:00 AM
oh gosh I hope it got into the contest. It is pure fun , Jennifer. Great storytelling that I think children would enjoy, seeing those stools floating mid-air!
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Date: 9/18/2021 4:25:00 PM
Hello Jennifer ... it may be nonsense, but your poem is really refreshing to read. It's certainly a great modern nursery rhyme and I loved it - thanks Jennifer - Lindsay
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Date: 9/18/2021 12:22:00 PM
Wow! Jenny, I enjoyed your nonsense tale from start to finish. Your imagination soared in this well-written write. Well done. Best wishes in the contest. Have a wonderful day and weekend my friend from across the pond;-) Alexis
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Date: 9/17/2021 2:07:00 PM
It's an enjoyable read...Lively in rhythm too...Great to read you again.
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Date: 9/17/2021 3:34:00 AM
Very creative, Jennifer... I enjoyed reading it thoroughly... A winner for me...
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JENNIFER PROXENOS
Date: 9/17/2021 5:23:00 AM
Supraja, thank you so much for an awesome comment, i will be visiting your page shortly. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Date: 9/15/2021 12:20:00 PM
A fun/cute/creative write. Question: When do we eat??? Have a blessed day.............
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JENNIFER PROXENOS
Date: 9/16/2021 7:37:00 AM
Well either on the way there or on the way back, but passengers should book well in advance is my advice? Thanks for commenting my friend, be well, Hugs and b.lessings, Jennifer
Date: 9/14/2021 2:09:00 PM
Loved it Jennifer. So clever with great imagery. Good Luck in the contest. God Bless, JB
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JENNIFER PROXENOS
Date: 9/15/2021 7:27:00 AM
Thank-you Judy, I'v missed you my friend, lovely to see your comment and glad you enjoyed. blessings and hugs, Jennifer
Date: 9/14/2021 12:41:00 PM
Now I'm feeling hungry! Loved your flight of fantasy through the tasty universe of delectable delights. Especially liked 'Never mind, Make that a Monday'. Your imagination never disappoints, my friend. Blessings and hugs ~ John
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JENNIFER PROXENOS
Date: 9/15/2021 7:48:00 AM
Hi John, so glad you visited missed you, glad you enjoyed! 'lets be like millionaires, And join all the billionaires, Take a flight and float in space, Show them we've joined their race! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Date: 9/14/2021 11:59:00 AM
Jenn...how creative and cool you are!Stunning! Panagiota
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JENNIFER PROXENOS
Date: 9/15/2021 7:53:00 AM
Hey Pangie mou, you must always know I think of you and also love your passionate poetry. HUGS AND BLESSINGS, Jennifer.
Date: 9/14/2021 6:00:00 AM
I enjoyed this fun poem, Jenn, good luck in the contest. Hugs, John
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JENNIFER PROXENOS
Date: 9/15/2021 8:09:00 AM
Hi John Gondolf - How lovely to have you visit, it seems that the days have become like sausages and just join on to the next without a break - especially with our business, sometimes it seems to me time is a luxury for the rich and famous only. Hope you are keeping well my friend. hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Date: 9/13/2021 1:28:00 PM
Great pen Jennifer with nice rhyme and flow too. Did you know over here we have a choc bar called Mars bars. Have a great week, blessings and hugs, Gordon
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JENNIFER PROXENOS
Date: 9/15/2021 8:13:00 AM
Hi Gordon, yes we have Mars bars also yummy yummy - thank you my loyal good and wonderful friend, I value your friendship very much. hugs and blessings Jennifer.
Date: 9/13/2021 12:14:00 PM
Hello Jennifer Proxenos, wow! i felt like I was on a journey through space. Hugs.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/15/2021 11:14:00 AM
Hello Jennifer, okay. lets do it. Yes I am keeping well. I hope that you are to. Blessings my friend. - Darlene
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JENNIFER PROXENOS
Date: 9/15/2021 8:16:00 AM
Well guess what, why don't we organize a space trip, i'll pull some strings! Hope you are keeping well dear friend, hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Date: 9/13/2021 7:35:00 AM
I love your creativity here and how ive missed your poems, my friend.... the flow and rhymes is really good, but you have lways been good at that...flakes and milky bars lol... such a funny and creative imagination.. made me smile...
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JENNIFER PROXENOS
Date: 9/15/2021 7:23:00 AM
hello my friend, what a lovely surprise - I miss your wonderful poetry also - such a talented poet and good person. Glad this made you smile. Read you poetry and commented - breathtaking as usual. hugs and blessings Jennifer.
Date: 9/13/2021 2:31:00 AM
Loved your nonsense Jennifer lol. Best of luck. Hope your week goes well. Tom
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JENNIFER PROXENOS
Date: 9/15/2021 7:19:00 AM
Thank you Tom, so glad you had a laugh, and for the good wishes. Guess you are going into or are in Autumn already, hope your winter is not going to be too cold. blessings, Jennifer.