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A Lot Like Love

THOSE SMILES SERVED AS BAITS AND I WANTED TO SET SOME DATES. I FELL IN THE OCEAN OF HER CUTENESS, STRUGGLING THERE WITH MY MUTENESS. STARING HER FROM DAWN TILL NOON. I THOUGHT I’LL TALK TO HER SOON. THERE WERE EXCHANGE OF SOME SMILES, I FELT LIKE COLLECTING THEM AND PRESERVING IN FILES. I HAD COURAGE TO TALK, AND THEN I JUST TOOK A WALK. THEN ONE DAY FINALLY I REALIZED IT WAS NOT LOVE, BUT LOT LIKE LOVE!!!

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/22/2015 3:33:00 AM

- Hello Mohit :) - Autumn is a great time to write and read poems :) - I welcome you to the P - Soup, with your great first poem :) - Hope you will have a nice time here with us - Best wishes and good luck - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Skat A

Date: 10/18/2015 4:27:00 PM

Mohit, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/18/2015 2:36:00 PM

Mohit, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@