A Lost Ring

You can't remember how things used to be
before this business with the ring began.
’Twas on display where all who passed could see;
under its spell, you broke the glass and ran.

With neither explanation nor a need,
you set your prize inside your trophy case.
It seems the ring has once again been freed;
just last week, someone broke into your place.

So here you are, discretely cruising pawns,
unfathomably captured by this gem.
Worse, now you know you're one of many Johns;
bereft, yet joined to some strange diadem.

Detached and disconnected, you push through;
you're never truly lost… The ring finds you.

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for the One in Five Poetry Contest
sponsored by Joseph May
written on 07/03/2022

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022



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Date: 7/15/2022 12:09:00 PM
Congrats on your win Jeff.....nicely done!
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Date: 7/12/2022 8:23:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a lovely write. Loved your ending. "The ring finds you." Have a blessed day................
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Date: 7/11/2022 8:15:00 PM
The ring find us. Beautifully said. Congratulations!
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Date: 7/11/2022 12:44:00 PM
It would be great if a lost ring found us, Congrats on your win Jeff
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Date: 7/11/2022 12:15:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Jeff. Enjoyed. Terry
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Terry Flood
Date: 7/11/2022 12:23:00 PM
I kept changing my mind with regard to viewpoint, but I liked the feel of it. Terry
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 7/11/2022 12:20:00 PM
Thanks, Terry, sort of a weird one… :-)
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