A Lost Ring

You can't remember how things used to be
before this business with the ring began.
’Twas on display where all who passed could see;
under its spell, you broke the glass and ran.

With neither explanation nor a need,
you set your prize inside your trophy case.
It seems the ring has once again been freed;
just last week, someone broke into your place.

So here you are, discretely cruising pawns,
unfathomably captured by this gem.
Worse, now you know you're one of many Johns;
bereft, yet joined to some strange diadem.

Detached and disconnected, you push through;
you're never truly lost… The ring finds you.

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for the One in Five Poetry Contest
sponsored by Joseph May
written on 07/03/2022
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Chunn Avatar
July 15, 2022 at 12:09 PM
Congrats on your win Jeff.....nicely done!
Goldsmith Avatar
July 12, 2022 at 8:23 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a lovely write. Loved your ending. "The ring finds you." Have a blessed day................
Alex Avatar
July 11, 2022 at 8:15 PM
The ring find us. Beautifully said. Congratulations!
May Avatar
July 11, 2022 at 12:44 PM
It would be great if a lost ring found us, Congrats on your win Jeff
Flood Avatar
July 11, 2022 at 12:15 PM
Congrats on your win, Jeff. Enjoyed. Terry
Flood Avatar
July 11, 2022 at 12:23 PM
I kept changing my mind with regard to viewpoint, but I liked the feel of it. Terry
Kyser Avatar
July 11, 2022 at 12:20 PM
Thanks, Terry, sort of a weird one… :-)
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