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A Lost Ring

You can't remember how things used to be before this business with the ring began. ’Twas on display where all who passed could see; under its spell, you broke the glass and ran. With neither explanation nor a need, you set your prize inside your trophy case. It seems the ring has once again been freed; just last week, someone broke into your place. So here you are, discretely cruising pawns, unfathomably captured by this gem. Worse, now you know you're one of many Johns; bereft, yet joined to some strange diadem. Detached and disconnected, you push through; you're never truly lost… The ring finds you. ————- for the One in Five Poetry Contest sponsored by Joseph May written on 07/03/2022

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Date: 7/15/2022 12:09:00 PM
Congrats on your win Jeff.....nicely done!
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Date: 7/12/2022 8:23:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a lovely write. Loved your ending. "The ring finds you." Have a blessed day................
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Date: 7/11/2022 8:15:00 PM
The ring find us. Beautifully said. Congratulations!
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Date: 7/11/2022 12:44:00 PM
It would be great if a lost ring found us, Congrats on your win Jeff
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Date: 7/11/2022 12:15:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Jeff. Enjoyed. Terry
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Terry Flood
Date: 7/11/2022 12:23:00 PM
I kept changing my mind with regard to viewpoint, but I liked the feel of it. Terry
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 7/11/2022 12:20:00 PM
Thanks, Terry, sort of a weird one… :-)

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