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A Lost Baby Boy

"A Lost Baby Boy" A ngels stroke soft golden tresses L onely baby floating on gossamer dresses O pulent candy clouds embrace tiny frame S nuggle sad heart while singing his name T ossed into a new realm of strangers B rave little soul projects love among dangers A live in spirit world missing family B ottle in hand to land of milk and honey Y earning for kisses from Mommy's sweet lips B asking in moonlight and silver star drips O ver the rainbow; across the blue seas Y esterday breathing in fond memories.

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Miranda Hawley

Date: 6/5/2022 6:44:00 AM

This is a depressing poem! However good job.

Skat A

Date: 3/13/2014 2:17:00 AM

deep write, SKAT

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/11/2012 7:57:00 AM

WON 1st place ... thankxxx..

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/10/2012 6:35:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win in Susan's "Lost" contest Linda-Marie. Love, Carol

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 8/9/2012 8:58:00 PM

Congrats on your first place win, Linda-Marie! My heart feels heavy after reading this beautiful poem. Only a mother knows this kind of love and loss... I hope you are starting to feel better. Love and Blessings, Rhonda

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/9/2012 8:50:00 PM

Linda my bff... congratulations with your awesome win. Hoping to read many contest tonight. always~ ;-) PD

Robert Johnson

Date: 8/9/2012 12:49:00 PM

My dearest congrats and condolences.

Gwendolen Song

Date: 8/9/2012 10:56:00 AM

Your write so beautifully of your lost son, Linda-Marie...each line breathed from the love of a pain-stricken mother...so impressed with this winning poem and the healing power it brings...congrats, gwendolen

Len Gasun

Date: 8/9/2012 9:51:00 AM

This is really a deserving winner! Congratulations dear Linda! hugs leonora

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 8/9/2012 7:21:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in my contest! Your entry pulled on my heartstrings, so touching...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/8/2012 3:28:00 PM

Linda, how ARE you now? Is your surgery soon? BIG congrats on your number one win here. WELL deserved!

Sherese Gooden

Date: 8/8/2012 2:41:00 PM

Congrats on your win Linda.

Joyce Johnson

Date: 8/8/2012 2:12:00 PM

Beaautiful and heartbreaking. Nothing harder to bear thant the loss of a child. congratulations on being able to write so endearingly about it and your win. Love, Joyce

Lee Ramage

Date: 8/8/2012 12:59:00 PM

A moving poem, congratulations on your win. Lee

Joann Grisetti

Date: 8/8/2012 7:34:00 AM

A very touching poem that moves one to tears. Congratulations on your win.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/1/2012 4:00:00 AM

Sooo sad and still so beautiful.....Wish you luck in contest Linda-Marie. - Have a lovely day in sunshine. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/1/2012 2:48:00 AM

teary-eyed am i from reading this tender, lovely piece, sweets... this one comes straight from the heart.. a winner for me!... thanks for honoring my star poem for you .. i was drawn by your inspiration!... bump okay now??.. huggs and luv!...:)

David Williams

Date: 8/1/2012 1:57:00 AM

Linda-Marie very sad, good luck...David

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/31/2012 8:31:00 PM

LInda, this is a most precious one you wrote of your lost son. What a heartbreak you didn't see him grow old! You did the perfect number of lines for the contest too!

Russell Sivey

Date: 7/31/2012 5:49:00 PM

This is a wondrous poem my friend! I know you have lost a baby in the past and I'm very sorry for that my friend! It is sad whenever the Lord takes back one of his baby children! Especially when we are unprepared to give up that child! But he is still in your heart and will always be there with you! Great work!!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/31/2012 4:36:00 PM

J.J. is my sweet inspiration for this LOST contest.. he is ever present .. so enjoy poets with luv..