Jack Ellison Poet Couplet

A Loosey Goosey Love Poem

Well tickle me bum and call me Lucy
My brain's all befuddled and loosey goosey

Silly images have taken over my thoughts
'Twix dreams and reality I'm fatally caught

All my friends are thinking I'm loopy
They don't know why I'm acting so goofy

Here's the reason it's quite simple and true
This love sick puppy has fallen for you!

© Jack Ellison 2012

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Laura Breidenthal March 23, 2018 at 9:57 PM Awwwwwwwwww, I love it. Love can make one loopy and goofy thats for certain. Always, Laura Jack Ellison March 24, 2018 at 7:18 AM And I'm as loopy as one gets!!! Beleive me, I know!!! LOL

Carol Eastman October 6, 2012 at 12:15 PM AAAwwweee... I didn't know you cared... ummm,I must be feeling better again... My stupid comments just keep coming... Help me Lord! Jack Ellison October 6, 2012 at 12:29 PM LOL Always love hearing what you have to say, my dear sweet friend!!! Keep your "stupid" comments coming... yee haw!

Len Gasun October 2, 2012 at 9:23 AM ha ha ha.... hilarious!!! i love it!!! an excellently written couplet which had made my night so bright! thank you for sharing, Jack. I'll read more of your work tomorrow. Good night. hugs:) leonora Jack Ellison October 2, 2012 at 4:42 PM You are so very kind my dear Leonara! Thanks so much... great big hugs and much love, Jack

Doris Culverhouse October 1, 2012 at 2:52 PM very cute and funny....enjoyed reading today on this rainy monday. Jack Ellison October 1, 2012 at 3:02 PM Glad I could add some joviality to your rainy day! Love and hugs, Jack

Debra Squyres October 1, 2012 at 1:29 PM Ain't Love Grand !! lol...This is sooo cute and sweet all at the same time. Love it !! Jack Ellison October 1, 2012 at 2:28 PM Many thanks my dear Debra! Glad you got a kick out of it... hugs and much love, Jack

Carol Sunshine Brown October 1, 2012 at 12:28 PM Today is the start of a new month and a new week. I am reading what looks to be some exceptional writing today. So glad I was able to read yours Jack. Love, Carol Jack Ellison October 1, 2012 at 2:27 PM Thanks a bunch Miss Sunshine! Glad you enjoyed my silliness! Love and big hugs, Jack

Russell Sivey October 1, 2012 at 6:54 AM This is such a fantastic write my friend! I just love reading your cleverly written poems! I really enjoyed this wondrously pieced together poem that I've read this morning! What a special write, so very fun loving, full of charisma my friend! Wonderful piece, Great Work!! Jack Ellison October 1, 2012 at 6:57 AM WOW! Can I take your comments to the bank! LOL Thanks once again Russell... have a super duper day! Cheers

Anne-Lise Andresen October 1, 2012 at 6:05 AM Funny poems Jack, good work. Thanks for a smile poems. - - Have a beautiful day. - - xox love Anne-Lise :) Jack Ellison October 1, 2012 at 6:07 AM You are very kind my dear Anne-Lise! I am sending you a great big smooch! LOL Love Jack