A Look Into Forever

A Look Into Forever I look upon the face of one Whose beauty defies aging And feel the anxious moment Like a wild beast before caging. The things I feel about The one who stands before me Will last a thousand lifetimes – As long as she adores me. And who can count the moments Or add one single day To a lifetime spent in praising The One who leads the way. This bond we cannot sever Unless we gaze into forever. Written by John Posey

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 12/23/2015 9:45:00 PM
Hey Jake! Very sweet! Love this special piece of work! dj
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Date: 10/17/2014 7:19:00 AM
soft beautiful flowing golden piece dear friend
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Date: 8/31/2014 10:29:00 AM
Lovely and sweet sonnet. I seem to find Lovely and sweet the only words to describe your poems for some reason, I guess because they are :)
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John Posey
Date: 8/31/2014 3:51:00 PM
I like to write of situations I discover while just listening sometimes. I feel like an old violin in the hands of a master.... Love ya ...... Jake
Date: 8/11/2014 6:35:00 PM
A wonderful sonnet my friend!!!! That river flows to a cloud of peaceful serenity ...... Join the sweetness of forever, past the toils of earthly life, into a joy that stops never.....
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John Posey
Date: 8/12/2014 2:39:00 PM
Robert, my dear friend, may you always know the joy I feel in receiving your generous comments....... Jake
Date: 8/11/2014 12:16:00 PM
ohhh, pure beautiful bliss of a read, john... gentle and soothing expression of affection;very loving!.. huggs
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John Posey
Date: 8/11/2014 5:02:00 PM
Thank you, nette.... I treasure your beautiful comments..... Love Ya.... Jake
Date: 8/11/2014 11:14:00 AM
Deep write John , read as many times to really understand , hv a blessed day.
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John Posey
Date: 8/11/2014 11:22:00 AM
I must confess that I wrote as the muse led me..... Therefore there is a fair amount of cryptic content the writer experienced. Thanks for an honest review....... Love Ya...... Jake
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