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A Long Wait

A LONG WAIT
Your name so far away now I don’t remember, but my nascent passion burnt then like ember when in high school on you I’d teen-age crush, out of my memory sweeping time didn’t brush. When your crystalline hazel eyes looked at me you colored my mind with the hues of ecstasy. Your smile set my heart throb on rippled rhyme, felt you’re made for me from beginning of time. So, I dreamt someday you’re going to be mine, on our coupled life sun of pink love would shine. Our future would take ordained course, I knew, but the only one in my obsessed heart was you. I didn’t know what your feeling was about me, I thought my heart I would expose for you to see. One day I asked you to come with me on a date, for the answer a long time you made me to wait.
February 7, 2019

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Date: 3/11/2019 4:47:00 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful First Placement with this lovely entry Subimal! xxoo
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 3/12/2019 1:20:00 AM
Many thanks, Connie.
Date: 3/9/2019 5:35:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Subimal. Eve ~`*
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 3/10/2019 12:48:00 AM
Thank you, Eve for your visit.
Date: 3/9/2019 12:43:00 PM
Such a beautiful this is, truly wonderful and certainly a joy to read, many congratulations on your 1st position in my contest, good luck and have a really nice day
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 3/10/2019 12:48:00 AM
Thank you, Faraz for the placement.

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