A Long Wait

A LONG WAIT
Your name so far away now I don’t remember, but my nascent passion burnt then like ember when in high school on you I’d teen-age crush, out of my memory sweeping time didn’t brush. When your crystalline hazel eyes looked at me you colored my mind with the hues of ecstasy. Your smile set my heart throb on rippled rhyme, felt you’re made for me from beginning of time. So, I dreamt someday you’re going to be mine, on our coupled life sun of pink love would shine. Our future would take ordained course, I knew, but the only one in my obsessed heart was you. I didn’t know what your feeling was about me, I thought my heart I would expose for you to see. One day I asked you to come with me on a date, for the answer a long time you made me to wait.
February 7, 2019
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Marcum Wong Avatar
March 11, 2019 at 4:47 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful First Placement with this lovely entry Subimal! xxoo
Sinha-Roy Avatar
March 12, 2019 at 1:20 AM
Many thanks, Connie.
Roper Avatar
March 9, 2019 at 5:35 PM
Congratulations on your win, Subimal. Eve ~`*
Sinha-Roy Avatar
March 10, 2019 at 12:48 AM
Thank you, Eve for your visit.
Ajmal Avatar
March 9, 2019 at 12:43 PM
Such a beautiful this is, truly wonderful and certainly a joy to read, many congratulations on your 1st position in my contest, good luck and have a really nice day
Sinha-Roy Avatar
March 10, 2019 at 12:48 AM
Thank you, Faraz for the placement.
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