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A Long Goodbye

A Long Goodbye A vast familiar landscape flutters and faulters;invites and departs Fog slowly rolls in, shrouding present and past,in a harsh, lonely tomb 6/11/22

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Michael Tor

Date: 7/27/2022 11:02:00 PM

Very impressive piece Robert, excellent my friend. Love the imagery in this one... God bless you...

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/2/2022 1:06:00 PM

Love your line, "Fog slowly rolls in," It covers everything. You could make a book out of this. Have a blessed day/weekend...........

Gershon Wolf

Date: 6/14/2022 8:52:00 PM

Melancholia strikes -- allegedly even monokus. lol. Poignant rapture, Robert. :) gw

Robert Gorelick
Date: 6/15/2022 12:16:00 PM

Hopefully this disease will go the way of polio and diphtheria and be gone for good. Thanks, gw

I Am Anaya

Date: 6/13/2022 9:30:00 AM

The same symptoms as covid fog, surroundings become unfamiliar as memory fails. Good write!

Robert Gorelick
Date: 6/14/2022 2:03:00 PM

I hope medical science will soon have a cure for this cruel affliction. Thank you, Anaya

Ann Foster

Date: 6/12/2022 8:35:00 AM

This was sadly beautiful. I can see the mist... Ann

Robert Gorelick
Date: 6/13/2022 9:12:00 AM

It's tragic how ecstatic happiness can lead to an intolerable gloom of the spirit! Robert

Deb M

Date: 6/12/2022 5:19:00 AM

Love this Robert…. haunting and intriguing! Debx

Robert Gorelick
Date: 6/13/2022 9:10:00 AM

For all of us the clock ticks insistently toward the sunset, Thank you Deb, hugs Robert