A Long Fairy Tale of My Life Part Ii

The entire palace winned my heart, Nicely carved infrastructure, rounded dome at the top,
Ignoring out of frame, entirely My eyes tried to just crop.
Seeing at the small window pane, A girl standing nearby,
Was busy talking to someone don't know why?
I got astonished looking at her beauty.
Blue eyes of her, blushing chubby cheeks like apples,
Dazzling beauty wearing a long flowing gown in purple.
My wings flattered when she resembled like an angel down the lane.
Felt like heaven touched my heart,looking at her sparking smile.
For the moment felt like I am a needle and she is the thread , weaving our life together.
Hey lord, She vibrated my nerves!

On the grand day, She weared golden musky gown flounced with its shimmering appearance.
Later Somebody cald her as a palestial queen, I got surprised.
Her sweet and simple appearance, ghoshhh her image got penetrated into the deep space of my soul.
She was so kind, deep down persona.
She festinated and utilized her every segment of life beautifully.
Her dynamic personality, down to earth,
Her nature,her calmness, thanks lord for giving birth.
Hey Mother Mary, thanks for showering lovely fragranced petals in my life!

My heart got clinged to the seven wonders of the sky.
God had spended his entire life for making this blissful lady.
My eyes sinked with her thrice,
She was beaming positively through her eyes.
But financially I wasn't strong.
Nobody would have accepted our relation.
Mentally I prepared and cudn't rebel.
Feelings disposed, parallelised my heart.
My eyes lasted on her till occasion was over.
Ohhh thiest, You made my soul thirsty, You made my life empty!

Though I strived hard in my heart for you to be mine forever,
But destiny didn't connected us together.
Nowhere in these birth I will be blessed.
Ravishing rose my heart lay down in pain.
With her essence life was aligned perfectly.
No doubt I am damn gonna miss my hearty crush.
Hey God, may you unite us somewhere in next reincarnation!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 2/7/2016 10:32:00 PM
Madhavi, congratulations on your win! Love your story :-)
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Date: 2/6/2016 4:22:00 PM
Madhavi, Congratulations on your wonderful "Once Upon A Time Win!!!" Luv ~LINDA~
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Date: 2/6/2016 11:03:00 AM
a beautiful fairy tale Madhavi congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/6/2016 10:52:00 AM
Madhavi, thank you for being a part of my contest, your poem was great :)*Smiles* -luloo
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