A Lonely Silver Ribbon

A lonely silver ribbon
                   Caught my eye today
A remnant of a shopper’s rush
                 Left on the shelf to say
 
I can sparkle, take me home
           My Christmas plans are few
And I would relish nothing more
            Than wrapping gifts for you

So as it spoke in ribbon speak
                     Calling out my name
I thought of how I’d once felt
                  Not chosen for a game

I bought that silver ribbon
              And took it home with me
And now it sits so sparkling bright
                      Underneath my tree

If people were like ribbon
           Perhaps, we’d keep in mind
That Christmas can be lonely 
                When you’re left behind
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017


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Date: 12/1/2017 11:12:00 PM
I love your twists and wrap-up. Great delivery, Mike. I think it's awesome to think of lonely people, particularly during the holidays. I'm making this a FAVE. Thanks, Mike.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 2/17/2020 9:21:00 AM
Thank ao much Line xxoo
Date: 11/30/2017 1:24:00 PM
Yes Mike and so many go thtough this... so many are alone and feel worse im thos season... nice use of metaphor..
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Mike Gentile
Date: 11/30/2017 2:16:00 PM
Thanks , Silent One !!
Date: 11/30/2017 10:32:00 AM
Loooooove this Mike!!!! Especially the last stanza that brings it all home. Awesome write! ~ Judy
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Mike Gentile
Date: 11/30/2017 11:08:00 AM
Thanks so much, Judy xxoo
Date: 11/30/2017 10:05:00 AM
This is a lovely poem Mike and so true. Happy Thursday :)
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Mike Gentile
Date: 11/30/2017 10:10:00 AM
Thanks, Heidi, xxoo Happy Thursday!!
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