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A Lonely Night

Cold winds blowing in the still night, Ghouls wander the lands, determined to give a fright, No sounds of joy are heard, Oh when i pray will these drapes of darkness be unveiled. The night brings with it , a feel of nothingness, Shrouding all that light had blessed with a menacing shade of black, Unable to control my fear , i fall back. The morning sun purges all evidence of night, A bright new day to live is in sight, But the darkness remains forever restless , To once again make despair seem endless.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 9/26/2013 3:55:00 PM
a nice little win....SKAT
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Date: 9/22/2013 7:32:00 PM
Chandrasekar, , congratulations on your win... always~ Linda
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Chandrasekar Singaram
Date: 9/22/2013 7:33:00 PM
Thanks so much for your support Linda :)
Date: 9/19/2013 6:21:00 AM
The poem gives a feeling of loneliness..Congrats..Sara
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Chandrasekar Singaram
Date: 9/22/2013 7:33:00 PM
Thanks Sara :)
Date: 9/18/2013 6:55:00 PM
a horror kind of loneliness with suspense and chopsticks too Congrats on your win. Morgan
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Chandrasekar Singaram
Date: 9/18/2013 7:31:00 PM
Thanks Danesh !
Date: 9/17/2013 5:43:00 PM
congrats on your win :)
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Chandrasekar Singaram
Date: 9/17/2013 5:49:00 PM
Thanks Sandra :)
Date: 9/17/2013 4:55:00 PM
We must overcome this fear of the dark for we must shut our eyes & then it is dark aye? Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Chandrasekar Singaram
Date: 9/17/2013 5:49:00 PM
Thanks for the kind words Debbie :)
Date: 9/17/2013 3:13:00 PM
congrats on place Shadow x smile
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Chandrasekar Singaram
Date: 9/17/2013 5:49:00 PM
Thanks Shadow :)
Date: 9/17/2013 2:23:00 PM
I REALLY like this one. WAY to GO~!!
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Chandrasekar Singaram
Date: 9/17/2013 5:49:00 PM
Thanks Andrea :)
Date: 9/17/2013 8:35:00 AM
Congrats on your poem winning in the contest, Chandrasekar. Namaste
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Chandrasekar Singaram
Date: 9/17/2013 5:48:00 PM
Thanks Dr Ram :)
Date: 9/16/2013 8:41:00 AM
wow! Chandrasekar, wow!!! that was lonely... one of the best ..wait let me rephrase that.."The Best Lonely" feeling poem I've ever read... Believe me this place is filled with deep poems like this... Love this one... a perfect 7 adding this on my favorite list... xox~ Linda
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Chandrasekar Singaram
Date: 9/16/2013 9:20:00 AM
Thanks Linda ! i really appreciate your kind words :)

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