A Lonely Evening

In many dreams of you, I wish
If I could get my hands on the wings
If only I could come over to you now, 
It would be the best moment in my life.
Alone in a cool evening
With the light of a candle and the breeze from afar
And then the moment would draw close
And the night would become our friend

And nature would support our breathe
And our dream would seem simple
And nightmare be far from us
For the moment would be the beginning of a new era
And the dawn would bring joy
Happiness and love
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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January 10, 2016 at 2:27 PM
this is a deep first poem... enjoyed reading.. always ~SKAT
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September 23, 2014 at 4:58 PM
Hi Philip,, Congratulations, In Regina's "Special Memory" contest..... Have a nice one, LINDA
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September 19, 2014 at 9:43 PM
a dream of a memory to make. Congrats on your win.
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September 19, 2014 at 5:44 AM
Congrats on the win, Philip
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September 16, 2014 at 5:51 PM
Hello Philip, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry:) Here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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September 14, 2014 at 7:40 PM
Hi Philip, what a deep powerful write this is! Bravo! A warm welcome to PoetrySoup and happy writings! Pandita
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September 14, 2014 at 2:36 PM
Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Philip - I choose your first moving and well written sonnet - You write skillfully - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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