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A Lone Tear Drop

I cry a lone teardrop. It falls softly onto my pillow. A burdened heart behind smiling eyes liberates the aching, diamond teardrop, when I dream of your soft touch. Without you Who am I? By Rhonda Johnson-Saunders, July 22, 2012 for The Concrete/Shape Contest (Craig Cornish)

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Date: 8/1/2012 6:09:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Craig's "Concrete/Shape" contest Rhonda. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/29/2012 10:31:00 PM
ANOTHER QUCIK,,, READ... RHONDA... CONGRATULATIONS... WITH YOUR AWESOME WIN..XOXOXOX~PD
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Date: 7/29/2012 5:48:00 PM
Well done, Rhonda! I like your verse and the teardrop shape is perfect. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Date: 7/29/2012 1:15:00 PM
Congratulations Rhonda, great shape and verse xx
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Date: 7/29/2012 1:07:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work..Sara
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Date: 7/29/2012 12:15:00 PM
Rhonda congrats on your win, tears of joy...David
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Date: 7/23/2012 12:45:00 AM
ohhh, a sentimental touch with a visual that accompanies such tender write, rhonda.. a winning bet.. ) huggs!
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Date: 7/22/2012 5:27:00 PM
nice write Rhonda...enjoyed
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Date: 7/22/2012 4:03:00 PM
great concrete poem! i like what you've written and how you've written it. good luck in the contest!
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Date: 7/22/2012 3:46:00 PM
Clever - I like it a lot Rhonda - Hope for a win for this one !!! - oxox love Anne-Lise
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