Rhonda Johnson-Saunders Poet Concrete

A Lone Tear Drop

I
cry
a lone 
teardrop.
It falls softly
onto my pillow.
A burdened heart
behind smiling eyes
liberates the aching,
diamond teardrop,
when I dream of 
your soft touch.
Without you
Who am 
I?


By Rhonda Johnson-Saunders, July 22, 2012
for The Concrete/Shape Contest (Craig Cornish)

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Carol Sunshine Brown August 1, 2012 at 6:09 AM Congratulations on your well deserved win in Craig's "Concrete/Shape" contest Rhonda. Love, Carol

Poet Destroyer A July 29, 2012 at 10:31 PM ANOTHER QUCIK,,, READ... RHONDA... CONGRATULATIONS... WITH YOUR AWESOME WIN..XOXOXOX~PD

Kim Merryman July 29, 2012 at 5:48 PM Well done, Rhonda! I like your verse and the teardrop shape is perfect. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl July 29, 2012 at 1:15 PM Congratulations Rhonda, great shape and verse xx

Sara Kendrick July 29, 2012 at 1:07 PM Congrats on your winning work..Sara

David Williams July 29, 2012 at 12:15 PM Rhonda congrats on your win, tears of joy...David

Nette Onclaud July 23, 2012 at 12:45 AM ohhh, a sentimental touch with a visual that accompanies such tender write, rhonda.. a winning bet.. ) huggs!

Joseph May July 22, 2012 at 5:27 PM nice write Rhonda...enjoyed

Ilene Bauer July 22, 2012 at 4:03 PM great concrete poem! i like what you've written and how you've written it. good luck in the contest!

Anne-Lise Andresen July 22, 2012 at 3:46 PM Clever - I like it a lot Rhonda - Hope for a win for this one !!! - oxox love Anne-Lise