A Lone Man’s Plight

Beneath the churning skies and wrathful sea, 
A lone man wails into swirling agony.
Each crashing wave, a relentless assault,
Mirroring the chaos of his inner tumult.

Beneath tempestuous heavens, alone he fights,
His vessel, both refuge and dungeon, a conflicting plight.
A shattered rudder, no course to absolution found,
Adrift on a storm’s fury, lost in madness profound.

Wailing winds weave a haunting tale of fears,
Echoing through the past, of worn, wearied years.
As monstrous waves loom with menacing calls,
He battles enclosing walls, and suffocating thralls.

Battered and broken, his sanity frays,
As the relentless onslaught spans endless days,
In his eyes, a depth of unspoken woes,
As he fights undertows that nobody knows.

Bruised by life’s relentless grind,
A solitary soul adrift, with no spiritual guide.
Time’s cruel hands, etched lines on a weathered face,
As he fights the unyielding storm, losing pace.

Haunting memories of home, lurk in his mind,
In the depths of his soul, remorse and regrets entwine.
The wailing waves and spitting spray,
The chaos of poor choices that lead him astray.

Decades spent in the bottles grip, a family torn asunder,
A wretched drunkard, prone to rages of thunder.
Wife and children gone, leaving him to dwell,
With naught but guilt and regrets, a solitary hell.

Lightening flashes, electric tendrils ignite the night.
A thunderous roar, a reverberating fright, 
The lone man’s vessel, a frail and feeble shell,
Beaten and battered, by the tempest’s ceaseless swell.

A splintering crack, rends the cold night air,
A toll his sanity can no longer bare.
Icy waters pouring in, a stinging caress,
As tears merge with ocean, his heart’s confess.

Battered and burdened, his spirit worn thin,
Scarred by arduous battles, damn demons within.
Consumed by the tempest he has wrought,
As the sirens of the sea claim their lot.

An ice-cold specter steals his final breath,
From unfathomable depths, a chilling, silent death.
Memories of love, a cherished home and kin,
A sinking reminder of what might have been. 

As the storm’s fury wanes, a mournful wail
His lifeless form drifts, an echoing knell.
In the sea’s soft embrace, he finds his peace,
A watery grave for a weary soul’s release.

A tragic journey ends, but his tale carries on,
A cautionary ode of battles never won.
In the echoes of the ocean’s lament, his legacy lies,
A sacrifice to the struggle, that haunts our lives.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024



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Date: 4/23/2024 10:09:00 PM
What a profound write! I love the cadence of your lines flowing in such a captivating manner! And also the way youv paired words to paint imagery is so very creative and clever! Especially “ electric tendrils” and the lines that follow that is just beyond brilliant! “ An ice-cold specter steals his final breath, From unfathomable depths, a chilling, silent death. Memories of love, a cherished home and kin, A sinking reminder of what might have been. “ soul hitting and so very moving! Powerful write! So well crafted! Pleasure reading this! Sending you light. Nice to meet another talented poet!
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Edward Wraith
Date: 4/24/2024 7:44:00 AM
Allow me to express my gratitude for your esteemed presence within my digital sanctuary and for gracing it with your eloquent praise. I am profoundly flattered, Empress. However, I must humbly admit that I feel unworthy of such high acclaim, particularly when it emanates from a wordsmith such as yourself—the queen of alliteration, the bard of ethereal beauty, and indeed, one of the esteemed legends here at PS. Your generous words have left me truly humbled and deeply honored. Wishing you a day filled with unparalleled beauty and inspiration.
Date: 4/23/2024 6:20:00 PM
No happy ending to this bad boy. Fighting undertows nobody knows... I'll bet that one hasn't been used before. I like it. A cautionary tale, to be sure. Not a pleasant thought that one might end up like this poor schlep, alone and unforgiven.
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Edward Wraith
Date: 4/23/2024 6:27:00 PM
A tragic tale indeed.
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