A Lollapalooza

Some call it William or Robert, or Pete Stands up and takes notice when you walk down the street Walking by a lollapalooza You try to outmanoeuvre Obstacles that jump out as you try to be discrete
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Eastman Avatar
July 24, 2016 at 10:24 AM
Tim is right on... Like his part in Tim's responce about rewarding your Lady and your part about trying to be discrete.
Smith Avatar
July 24, 2016 at 9:56 AM
A loose fitting shirt is the order...when you gotten this disorder...don't move to fast...hope it wont last....and if your lady asks you can reward her
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