A Logical Analysis of Events So Far

Floaters crisscross blinking eyes.
After a brief scientific analysis
it is concluded that an invasion of minute
alien spacecraft has occurred.

An optician assures:
these aberrant phenomena are perfectly normal
for a non-perfect being.

Unverified estimates of an unknown illness;
projections of billions of invasive germs follow,
tank-like organisms working overtime
to smash through flesh and plasma
reigning shock-shells of dissolution
onto peace loving white knights.

It is to be hoped that microbial
barbaric and brawny hosts
of avenging bacteria will soon
assault these malignant besiegers
from the rear. Surprise attacks
from all sides

until the munching, mad
germs in their pointy Prussian war helmets are
subdued, but it’s touch and go
it can turn out either way.

The day is spent ignoring
simple explanations of ocular spots
knowing for certain only infected spacecraft
can possibly maneuver like that.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



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Date: 3/21/2021 9:47:00 AM
Interesting. As one who suffers from macular degeneration, I can relate. My floaters dark to and fro like alien ships. Loved this poem, too. Mark, whatever you do, keep writing and keep sharing your work here. You have an avid fan!!!
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Eric Ashford
Date: 7/1/2021 5:09:00 PM
I hear you Milton, good of you to share. Bless
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