A Lock of Hair

A lock of hair
  A torn shoe string
A rocking chair
  A wedding ring

A dial phone
  A worn headband
A xylophone
  An old night stand

A broken piece, a little bit
  of what has passed
No longer fits
  ~ Their memories last
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019


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Date: 7/28/2019 1:13:00 PM
sometimes we hold onto these things just to help hold the memories closer! Beautifully penned Gershon! Love this poem it speaks volumes in its simplicity :) hugs
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/28/2019 2:18:00 PM
I truly take 'simplicity' as a great compliment. Often it bespeaks elegance and purity. Thank you so much for your feedback and kind words, Sandra. :) gw
Date: 7/28/2019 10:11:00 AM
True, how thing hold so much to remember. Great one :)
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/28/2019 2:19:00 PM
Yes, and let us close our eyes and hold on to them, as well as proclaim them to others. Thank you for the feedback and the support, Heidi! :) gw
Date: 7/28/2019 8:38:00 AM
A nice swing to this poem...
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/28/2019 12:51:00 PM
Thanks, Arturo. Nice to hear this from you, the maestro of 'Swing Poetry!' Best wishes, Gershon
Date: 7/28/2019 7:37:00 AM
This was such a sing-song write. I found myself loving every line, Mr. Wolf.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/28/2019 12:50:00 PM
I'm glad you liked this sing-song verse, Mrs. Krutsinger. (If I'm Mr. Wolf, then you are Mrs. Krutsinger. LOL.) How about Caren and Gershon? Works for me! :) gw
Date: 7/28/2019 4:25:00 AM
such treasured memories GW and I can relate to many but especially I still have locks of my son's hair :-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 7/28/2019 12:49:00 PM
Thanks for the enthusiasm for this lock of hair, Jan... I have locks of my kids' hair too. :) gw
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