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A Living Self Bodied Laboratory

a living self bodied laboratory 
                              sensation causes in mind test tube 
                          from in and out atmospheric attractions 
                         distractions are felt from opposite reactions 
                        Conscience the researcher experiments results             
                             watches what is going on step by step
                              in their each and every composition

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/20/2017 3:07:00 PM

- "Sensation causes in mind test tube" ... sounds a bit without feeling and heart - I prefer human feeling, Bl - However, the future is robots without warmth and caring hands - Great written, my friend :) - Lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath
Date: 5/21/2017 1:47:00 AM

Thanks my lovely friend for your comment. It's inner feeling only the way how our mind changes step by step having impact of the outer and inner atmospheres. You are always genius. Loved always, bl