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A LIVING POEM

I wander through wild gardens until dusk gathers its soft-gold cup 
letting vines loosen their secrets, curling open like a drifting halo 
every petal leans toward light, offering its quiet breath to the breeze 
moss keeps my footsteps gentle, shaping silence into a living poem
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Maverick Avatar
June 11, 2026 at 11:48 PM
Poetry is everywhere Sara..You do a Really good display here as you walk In life.' God bless.)
Gauthier Avatar
June 11, 2026 at 2:16 PM
delightful form ~
Poet Avatar
June 11, 2026 at 9:51 AM
Gorgeous and optimistic. Motivating an outing and a boon from ecology.
Goldsmith Avatar
June 11, 2026 at 9:34 AM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful/creative "A LIVING POEM" Acrostic write. Lovely Picture... Have a great/blessed day writing away..............
DiMino Avatar
June 11, 2026 at 5:34 AM
Very positive, lovely. Inspiring a walk and a blessing of nature.
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