A Little Touch of Rubaiyat

Our black, firm, waists, so taut and thin,
the preferred drink was Saphire gin,
and in the dreamy cool black night,
beating hearts, living skin!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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March 20, 2015 at 6:06 PM
Hi Peter, Congratulations on your awesome win........ Luv ~LINDA~
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February 22, 2015 at 7:12 AM
Powerful images evoked with this one my friend.. This is deep and image feasting poetry! So much from such few words is near an impossible task but you've nailed it. A7 and a hearty bravo!!!!
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February 22, 2015 at 7:20 AM
Cheers Robert....very nice of you!...Peter
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