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A Little Snowflake

There once was a little snowflake that was beautiful, cold and white He was created up high within the clouds during a storm one winters night There were millions and millions of other flakes but, no two that look alike So, every snowflake received a name and, his given name was Mike Now as long as the wind was blowing hard the more Mike hung around But, it made him large and heavy For, now he's heading towards the ground There was Susan, Steven, Jimmy and Kyle There was Sally, Kim and bill They all came down together with Mike as they landed on a sill Of a cold and frosty window on that stormy winters night They gathered all together as they waited for morning light The sun then rose above the horizon it's light...lit up every flake The colors that came from all Mike's friends a rainbow it did make The beautiful snow lit morning left Mike nowhere else to roam But, he was happy to be there with all his friends as he made that sill his home

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Date: 1/1/2014 3:07:00 AM
Congrats on the win here Rodger,,!
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Roger Horsch
Date: 1/1/2014 8:04:00 AM
Thank you so much for stopping by and visiting Joe, May you have a wonderful New Year....Roger
Date: 12/28/2013 5:23:00 PM
A wonderful and whimsical story about those falling snowflakes. A lovely poem! Congratulations on your win, Roger!...Thank you for the kind congrats on my poem.
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Roger Horsch
Date: 12/28/2013 5:54:00 PM
I love to write like this. Thank you so much Kelly. It was a fun poem to write....Hugs...Roger
Date: 12/28/2013 2:14:00 AM
Oh! what a wonderful journey of a happy snowflake:)
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Roger Horsch
Date: 12/28/2013 10:07:00 AM
Thank you so much Vandana, I enjoyed having you stop by......Roger
Date: 12/27/2013 10:34:00 PM
I'll never look at snowflakes the same way again. I love how you gave each a name. It reminds me of the saying in the bible that all of our hairs are numbered. I imagine God must have a name for each snowflake. Beautiful, Roger. Congrats!
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Roger Horsch
Date: 12/28/2013 10:05:00 AM
If God had a name for each snowflake. I am sure that the name of one of the prettiest snowflakes would be Juliet. Thank you so much for visiting.....hugs...Roger
Date: 12/27/2013 10:34:00 AM
Oh! I loved it! It's beautiful! And so creative!
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Roger Horsch
Date: 12/27/2013 1:34:00 PM
Why, Thank you Carol, It was nice to here from you....Roger
Date: 12/27/2013 9:39:00 AM
congrats on a great win Roger..
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Roger Horsch
Date: 12/27/2013 9:55:00 AM
Thanks Joseph, It is always wonderful when you stop by....Roger
Date: 12/27/2013 9:02:00 AM
Enjoyed the poem for the first time and congratulations on this fine win, Roger
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Roger Horsch
Date: 12/27/2013 9:15:00 AM
Thank you Dr Ram, I had fun writing this one
Date: 12/27/2013 1:40:00 AM
Hello my lovely friend Roger, .. Loving this one all over again.... CONGRATULATIONS -thank you for supporting my contest. Wishing you the best when it comes to Health and Happiness, this coming New Year! xox~ LINDA
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Roger Horsch
Date: 12/27/2013 6:33:00 AM
Thank you so much Linda, I just love to enter your contests. Thank you for the win. This poem was fun to write....Hugs....Roger
Date: 12/21/2013 8:00:00 AM
This is a wonderful ballad! Thank you for your visit and kind comments
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Roger Horsch
Date: 12/21/2013 8:48:00 AM
Thank you Monterey, And you are welcome...Hugs...Roger
Date: 12/20/2013 10:21:00 PM
The beautiful snow lit morning...beautiful line among a wonderful poem...
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Roger Horsch
Date: 12/21/2013 8:46:00 AM
Thank you so much Donna, It has been wonderful that you visit my poetry....Hugs...Roger
Date: 12/20/2013 6:09:00 PM
I loved it ....Seren
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Roger Horsch
Date: 12/20/2013 8:45:00 PM
Thank you Seren, You are too kind.....Roger
Date: 12/19/2013 2:10:00 PM
A beautiful ballad with a wonderful message. Thank you for the visit (: Always, Laura
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Roger Horsch
Date: 12/19/2013 3:10:00 PM
Now look who's being so sweet. Thank you Laura, I will visit you again....Hugs....Roger
Date: 12/18/2013 5:43:00 PM
Roger What a creative and imaginative write. The way the snowflakes came together to make a beautiful rainbow was brilliant writing. Awesome job my friend Thanks for the sweet comment on my Hard Times poem. Hugs
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Roger Horsch
Date: 12/19/2013 6:42:00 AM
I love it when you visit. Thanks Robin....Hugs....Roger
Date: 12/16/2013 8:31:00 AM
I love how you personified the snowflakes...well penned...I enjoyed the read
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Roger Horsch
Date: 12/16/2013 8:53:00 AM
Thank you Joseph, I enjoyed writing this poem....Roger
Date: 12/15/2013 11:12:00 AM
Great Ballade Roger. A lot of meaning with a fine ending. Nice little story from beginning to end.
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Roger Horsch
Date: 12/15/2013 12:02:00 PM
Thanks Vincent, This was a fun one to write....Roger
Date: 12/15/2013 9:46:00 AM
Roger very creative poem you have here I enjoyed this one very much.
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Roger Horsch
Date: 12/15/2013 9:57:00 AM
Thank you Joseph, I enjoyed writing this poem...Your friend in poetry....Roger
Date: 12/14/2013 10:17:00 PM
The sound of this is perfect... I love it Roger, I wouldn't mind being part of a SILL... Super enjoyed... Hope you got my soup mail.... LINDA
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Date: 12/16/2013 5:25:00 PM
Of course I'd wanna be part of the sill..... And have everyone on top.. LOL...
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Roger Horsch
Date: 12/15/2013 9:39:00 AM
Ah, You finally read it. But I don't know if you want to be part of the sill. I think having Susan,Steven Jimmy, Kyle, Sally, Kim and Bill resting on top of you would be one too many. Or maybe not. I just don't know. LOL...Thanks Linda....Luv & Hugs.....Roger
Date: 12/14/2013 12:43:00 AM
I agree with Kim here. this is so whimsical. You do really great poetry that children would enjoy.
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Roger Horsch
Date: 12/14/2013 5:21:00 PM
Thank you Andrea, I do enjoy writing poems like this. I think I will focus on this type of writing for a while and see where it goes. I love hearing from you. I have been so busy at work lately. But I still check the soup when I can....Hugs....Roger
Date: 12/13/2013 9:48:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your delightful poem, Roger. A light hearted, whimsical piece. Well done. Love, Kim
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Roger Horsch
Date: 12/14/2013 5:16:00 PM
Thanks so much for reading my new poem.....Hugs....Roger
Date: 12/13/2013 9:21:00 PM
Nice allegorical write, Roger
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Roger Horsch
Date: 12/14/2013 5:15:00 PM
Why thank you Dr. Ram....Roger
Date: 12/13/2013 4:50:00 PM
Winter is one of my favorite seasons, so I did enjoy the tale you told here, Roger! Really good work!...Thank you for the kind congrats on my poem!
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Roger Horsch
Date: 12/13/2013 6:06:00 PM
Winter is one of my favorite seasons Also. Thanks for reading this one Kelly....Hugs...Roger
Date: 12/13/2013 12:37:00 PM
- Thanks Roger - a enjoyable poem to read - snow and children are a joy to watch. - Have a great weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Roger Horsch
Date: 12/13/2013 12:42:00 PM
Thanks for reading my new poem....Hugs....Roger