A Little Piece of Paradise

A Little Piece of Paradise
An Eden-like orangery, her secret place for refreshing reverie, a haven, from an abusive marriage, where her body and mind are free. Away from a domineering, intrusive household, her own favorite hideaway – a refuge from her unhappy world. Here she is serene enjoying peace and blessed tranquility, nestled in the nurturing bosom of this fertile orangery. Contentedly she inhales the sweet fragrance of orange trees in bloom, that permeates to every corner of this sunlit, warm welcoming room. An enticing delight, time spent alone here is her singular vice, as she lingers in the safety of this little piece of paradise.
Re-reading familiar poetic verses from a well-worn book, she experiences sheer bliss sitting in this hospitable nook. What joy communing with riveting Romantic poets, like beloved Brontë, Browning, Rossetti, and Eliot. Reveling in her sacred solitude, she relishes their consoling company, amid thriving exotic orchids and other delicate tropical greenery. Nothing compares to the immeasurable pleasure she derives, from this brief respite with which her spirit renews and revives. Before returning to a hard-hearted husband who is as cold as ice, she clings a while longer to this precious piece of paradise.
07-18-2014 Contest: A Poem in Paradise Sponsor: Isaiah Zerbst Placement: 2nd
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November 12, 2014 at 6:26 PM
I wonder how many women and men can relate to this poem; I could relate to it, as far as the precious piece of paradise. There are so many things in life that takes us to that special place of peace. Well written Pandita. Thank you.
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November 13, 2014 at 10:42 AM
Hi Lara, you are so on point with your comments. It is not easy for the abused and those who are troubled to find a refuge, a place of peace where they can obtain some respite from their pain. Thank you, my friend, for your appreciation of this piece and for your wonderful compliments. Warmest regards. Pandita
Ayala Avatar
August 29, 2014 at 8:10 PM
Sad, lovely piece - excellently penned, dear Pandita! Kika
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August 29, 2014 at 9:31 PM
I am happy that you appreciate my work! Thank you, Kika! Pandita
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July 29, 2014 at 12:12 PM
Congratulations, on your win.... Nicely done Pandita... PD
Sietesantos Avatar
July 29, 2014 at 3:24 PM
Many thanks, dear Linda, for your usual kind compliments that I truly appreciate! Kindest regards.
Dietrich Avatar
July 24, 2014 at 12:09 AM
very nice, pandita. and captures well the peace of her brief respite. Congrats for your win.
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July 24, 2014 at 9:44 AM
Thank you, thank you, thank you, Andrea, for your continued support, my friend!
Ruiz Avatar
July 23, 2014 at 10:19 PM
Very nicely written I love how this poem flows.
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July 24, 2014 at 9:45 AM
Hi Kimberly, many thanks for your kind compliments. I really appreciate it! Kindest regards.
Jasti Avatar
July 23, 2014 at 8:42 PM
Hi Pandita; The title itself is wonderful and the poem is very touching and inspiring! Hearty congrats to you for the win in the contest. R K
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July 23, 2014 at 8:47 PM
Many thanks, dear friend, for your sweet compliments which I dearly appreciate! Warmest regards to you!
Callus Avatar
July 23, 2014 at 8:40 AM
....back again Pandita....this time to confirm my initial impressions and to congratulate you on a deserved win! // paul
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July 23, 2014 at 9:07 AM
Thank you, thank you, thank you for your continued support, my friend!
May Avatar
July 23, 2014 at 8:06 AM
Wonderful write Pandita...congrats on the win
Sietesantos Avatar
July 23, 2014 at 8:15 AM
Hi Joseph, thank you so much for your continued support.
Lindley Avatar
July 23, 2014 at 8:05 AM
I love this write, it's important message and the fact it is a pleasure to read because it is so very well written my friend. I had a sister in such a relationship and she'd not allow me to help by my usual method of dealing with such men(I was club bouncer for almost 20 years ). Big congrats on your win my friend!!!
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July 23, 2014 at 8:23 AM
Hi Robert, I wish your sister would allow you to help but unfortunately so many abused individuals refuse intervention from any source. I am glad to hear from you, my friend, and appreciate your kind compliments. Warmest regards.
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July 23, 2014 at 8:02 AM
I expected to see this one on the list and I have not been dissapointed. Congratulations.
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July 23, 2014 at 8:13 AM
Richard, thank you so much for your great support!
Allison Avatar
July 23, 2014 at 7:58 AM
dropping back with my congratulations and another read of this wonderful poem! Hugs jan xx
Sietesantos Avatar
July 23, 2014 at 8:17 AM
Hi Jan, thanks again for your compliments and well wishes!
Smith Avatar
July 23, 2014 at 6:02 AM
Congrats on a great win, dear Pandita! Hugs.. Arlene
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July 23, 2014 at 7:15 AM
Hi Arlene, many thanks for your kind compliments. I really appreciate it! Kindest regards.
A. Sharma Avatar
July 23, 2014 at 5:18 AM
Very beautiful obvious write Pandita,, taking you to glory ,, congrats my dear friend!
Sietesantos Avatar
July 23, 2014 at 7:16 AM
Hi Dr. Upma, thank you so much for your kind compliments which I truly appreciate! Warmest regards!
Callus Avatar
July 22, 2014 at 2:40 PM
I love your take on this contest picture, Pandita. You bring to the fore the contrast between the good and the bad, the ugly and the beautiful, sadness plus heartache and peace of mind. Very well done! // paul
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July 22, 2014 at 2:49 PM
Paul, I am so humbled by your wonderful compliments on this special piece. Your thoughtful comments have made my day! Thank you!
Palli Avatar
July 22, 2014 at 9:57 AM
Very well written. Could feel the emotions!
Sietesantos Avatar
July 22, 2014 at 12:12 PM
Thank you so very much, dear Susan. I really appreciate your kind comments and compliments! Have a wonderful day!
Lamoureux Avatar
July 22, 2014 at 7:14 AM
In reading the comments I was pleased this was not about you. The poem expresses angst and the importance of a sanctuary. It is a lovely sanctuary and I felt the peace permeate her heart and my own in the process.
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July 22, 2014 at 12:30 PM
Richard, you are absolutely right about what this poem expresses and I am so glad you can empathize with her. I have seen so many women who stay in abusive situations for one reason or another. In such a world, only a sanctuary helps them to keep their sanity. Thank you so much for honoring me with a visit! Kindest regards.
Situation Avatar
July 21, 2014 at 7:54 PM
so that's an orangery. I maybe wrong but the first part told me all about you. God only know how many other women and men you share this with. it's a good entry, wait and see where it places.
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July 22, 2014 at 12:35 PM
While I personally have never been subjected to an abusive relationship, I am a strong advocate against any form of abuse and definitely empathize with women who experience it. Thank you for visitng and commenting on this special piece! Have a great day!
Ioane Avatar
July 21, 2014 at 9:50 AM
Hi Pandita I enjoyed this poem and you are so right, beautiful love poetry is the best medicine for not only abuse but many other ailments of the heart. Good luck for the contest. Alofas. Tiaua.
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July 21, 2014 at 10:18 AM
Hi Tiaua, I very much appreciate your lovely compliments and good wishes, my friend. Many thanks to you for your kind support. Warmest regards.
Robson Avatar
July 20, 2014 at 9:19 AM
My favorite poetry is truly well done verse, this is lovely Pandita...Keith.
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July 20, 2014 at 1:18 PM
Hi Keith, thank you so very much, my friend, for your wonderful compliments on this piece which mean a lot to me. Thanks for your kind support.
Goff Avatar
July 19, 2014 at 10:30 PM
Thanks for stopping by, Pandita...went on a hike thru prairie-grass in the country myself today, just to clear my head and watch butterflies cavort...your verse, nicely done, resonates deeply! Bravo! jmg
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July 20, 2014 at 1:16 PM
Hi James, I am so appreciative of your compliments. Noting how much you enjoyed watching the butterflies on your hike, please take a look at my piece entitled "The Butterfly Flutters By" which I think you will like! Thanks again, my friend!
Anish Avatar
July 19, 2014 at 5:26 PM
You paint a beautiful scene in this one! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Sietesantos Avatar
July 19, 2014 at 6:08 PM
Thank you so very much, Matthew, for your kind compliments! Best wishes to you too, my friend!
Rodgers Avatar
July 18, 2014 at 8:50 PM
Lovely images thanks for sharing.
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July 19, 2014 at 10:37 AM
Hi Aberfoyle, thank you for your comments and compliments! Best wishes always!
Allison Avatar
July 18, 2014 at 5:34 PM
SIMPLY STUNNING! I loved the imagery from start to finish and the subject of domestic abuse is sensitively tackled. good luck in the contest. Hugs Jan xxx
Sietesantos Avatar
July 18, 2014 at 6:56 PM
Hi Jan, thank you so very much. I do appreciate the wonderful feedback and compliments and I am glad that you see what I was trying to reflect in this piece. Best wishes.
A. Sharma Avatar
July 18, 2014 at 2:10 PM
Beautiful write Pandita! Loved ur paradise ,, gl in contest //Upma//
Sietesantos Avatar
July 18, 2014 at 2:38 PM
Hi Dr. Upma, thank you so much for your kind comments and compliments which I do appreciate!
Tidd Avatar
July 18, 2014 at 12:08 PM
Glad to see you back. I certainly hope this isn't biographical, however, at least the abusive spouse part. Still, literature can be a wonderful salve and refuge for all kinds of life's hardships.
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July 18, 2014 at 2:14 PM
Thank you so much, Jim. Please be assured that this is definitely not biographical - I have zero tolerance for abuse of any kind!
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