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A Little Goodbye

Tears fall down like rain,
Born from unspeakable pain.
No matter what she does, how hard she tries;
All she gets is a bunch of lies.
All she wants, all she needs;
Is to be loved, to be free.
Can someone save this little girl,
Can someone fix her broken world?
And as she dies inside,
She whispers a little goodbye.

Copyright © Angelita Becerra | Year Posted 2009

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 11/5/2009 3:23:00 PM Beautiful rhyme on a serious subject.. great write, Angelita, and welcome aboard the Poetry Soup train... keep at it... Linda-Marie, Poetess Extraordinaire' and Poetry Soup "Sweetheart" per HGarvey Daniel Esquire... check out his Daffy Definitions .. its fun... enjoy.. Login to Reply

James Fraser Date: 11/3/2009 2:51:00 PM Angelita, what a sad but beautiful piece, thank you so much for sharing >> James Login to Reply

Ashley Yates Date: 11/3/2009 10:58:00 AM Beautiful and full of so much sorrow... Sometimes you have to save yourself instead of waiting to be saved... I mean who knows what you need better than you? Great write and hang in there. Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 10/28/2009 12:38:00 PM Sounds like a very sad situation here. Keep writing it helps. Sara Login to Reply

John Freeman Date: 10/28/2009 12:12:00 PM God's love in this world is so much needed today. And is rejected like it is the plague, rather than the ego personas of the mind. Hate and greed breeds more hate and greed. It is my hope that your write and others like it will help draw attention to this illusion of humanity's mind. God bless, Sincerely, Love, Moses Login to Reply

John Freeman Date: 10/28/2009 12:03:00 PM Your poem echoes the multitude of the little voices of small children, of our broken world today. Voices of abused children of broken marriages, of parents who just aren't ready to be parents. And adults who are perverted, from their own past, perverted experience, so on and so forth. It is a perverted mind experience that new born babys are born into in this day. It is up to humanity as a whole to change the mind sets of this generation, if there is to be a change for the better in this world. Login to Reply