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A Little Girl Cries

A little girl cries Porcelain doll lies broken No solace for tears A young woman cries Heart, soul, and dreams lie broken Oh, to be a child Eileen Manassian Ghali

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Arthur Vaso

Date: 4/16/2014 10:48:00 PM

You have melted my heart with this!!

Jon A Cavanaugh

Date: 9/12/2013 10:25:00 PM

I love the way this poem of yours makes the reader think beyond what is written. Excellent write. Bravo!

Poet Tacito

Date: 9/11/2013 9:32:00 AM

Painful, yet powerful. Tremendous job.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/12/2013 12:30:00 AM

Drake.... :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/11/2013 7:07:00 AM

A part of that child is always with us. This is a sad one.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/12/2013 12:29:00 AM

Yes, you are right, Richard. Yes...this is a sad one...Thanks or the visit

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/11/2013 1:42:00 AM

- Sad tears ..... well written, Eileen!! ..... there are tears in my last poem too :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/11/2013 5:04:00 AM

I will check it out, sweet Anne Lise...This come from a broken place in my heart!!! Yes, to be a child again would be lovely....

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 9/10/2013 8:17:00 PM

This is short but good. Thanks for sharing..... Lucilla

Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/11/2013 5:03:00 AM

Thanks ever so much, my dear. Glad to have your visit! :)