A Little Child of the Night

Placed 8th in :
A Brian Strand Premiere no. 1217 
Poerty Contest
A Little Child of the Night (Revisited 21 June 2023)

                                                        A        
                                                      little 
                                                      child,            
                                                   joyful and 
                                                 smiling above
                    in the nightly sky, Keen to please the beholder`s eyes     
                         and beckoning her to tenderly take him In her    
                              arms and fondle with him, Shower pure      
                                  motherly love and lull him to rest                
                                     Close by  her maternal breast                                       
                                      until the radiant light of the                                 
                                         coming day Will without                                     
                                         woe veil his       lesser light                                        
                                       away. When    *      night will                                         
                                      stealthily                    creep in,          
                                     up high                           he will                            
                                    smile                                  anew.
                                   *   *                                     *    *                                                                    
                                 *                                                    *
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Date: 5/19/2023 11:58:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning placement, with this creative work and form. Thanks for dropping by my page, your comment is much appreciated.
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Date: 5/19/2023 3:47:00 AM
Creative winning work. Way to go. Thanks for sharing this winner. Congratulations. Sara
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Krishnanand Guptar
Date: 5/19/2023 11:13:00 AM
Thanks for your encouraging remarks Sara. It was a first experimental attempt. Hope to be going further
Date: 5/19/2023 2:18:00 AM
A very beautiful work. Congratulations!
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Krishnanand Guptar
Date: 5/19/2023 11:17:00 AM
I do appreciate your heartening remarks and for your visit. Wish you a nice forthcoming week-end.
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