A Little Angel

A little angel came to Earth one day. but he didn't come here to stay. Three years was his time limit. His parents did not know it then, but God for him, had a plan. The day he was born, to everyone he brought joy. His parents loved him from the start. Manuel Zachary was his name. He grew up pretty quick. While he was here, he spread smiles, love and star dust everywhere. His family loved him very much. He was their little Angel from above. Three years he was here to spread his love and joy. One day he heard a call. It was God calling him home. His parents couldn't understand - why with them - he couldn't stay. Now he is back where he belongs and from there he watches over them. Every now and than he gives them a sign. He spreads some star dust, to let them know that he is still around... 08/14/2012 Written by Lucilla M. Carrillo Comments: This did happened. I was asked to write this poem. Hope you like it.

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Date: 11/5/2012 11:29:00 AM
I like it very much, often we fail to recognize we are in the presence of Angels until they are taken from us. I am sur your friends appreciated this thoughtful poem.
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Date: 10/15/2012 6:54:00 PM
Not like it. Love it!!! Such brilliance in your words. Hugs Michael
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Date: 8/19/2012 9:09:00 PM
A charming, wonderful poem you did for your friends. How beautiful! -A little angel to all who knew him. I bet he was cute too! Good night, Lucilla. Love ya, Toquyen
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Date: 8/19/2012 12:48:00 PM
Hello...just what I thought.. keep the write^up^up! your friend in the pen/G.FIELDS I am recommending this one...gf
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Date: 8/18/2012 11:58:00 AM
A poem of faith
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Date: 8/18/2012 2:56:00 AM
such a wonderful sincere poem.
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Date: 8/17/2012 8:15:00 AM
Brings back memories of the same experience i had in life, about which i am yet to find the right words to talk!! Jag
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Date: 8/16/2012 4:43:00 PM
A very touching poem penned here Lucilla!!! Love it dearly!!
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Date: 8/15/2012 10:25:00 PM
Lucilla, this brought tears to my eyes. I know i don't think much of God, and why he has special plans for some angles. When I was young I had an angle myself. I can not accept the thought God calling her home. I don't think much of it...oh! well...i better let you go..I'm getting all teary eyed...This is very beautiful, Zachary is still in your hearts.. God bless...thank you for your nice comment... xox~PD
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Date: 8/15/2012 8:39:00 PM
how wonderful you wrote this poem, I assume for his parents? It's very sweet and I like how you put the star dust into it.
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Date: 8/15/2012 6:24:00 PM
a little angel was taken today, but he filled so many hearts with joy, this beautful child , this beautiful boy. GOD does have a plan for him, and with GOD he will win
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Date: 8/15/2012 6:19:00 PM
A dear write which should bring good memories. Light & Love
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Date: 8/15/2012 2:23:00 PM
This is a very emotive work that you have penned ...I think that it helps to write about the loss of a child even though we know they have gone on to a home in heaven..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 8/15/2012 2:47:00 AM
Lucilla, thank you for write this golden gem - Beautiful and well done my friend. - Have a lovely day. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
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