A Little Air Please - New Year's Resolution

A Little Air Please - New Year's Resolution

Breathing is an important thing to do
I think I will resolve to do it too
Through and through the New Year
I think I will start at the stroke of twelve
And make it my New Year’s resolution
Take one breath at a time and call it mine
Swallow air, as if it is my very first time 
And then for good measure
I resolve to do it again
Breath once in and once out
Throughout the year
I hope I get it right
Sometimes I’m confused and I forget
Should I start with an exhale first
Then do the inhale next?
I want to do the New Year right
If I hold my breath too long
Will I lose my life?
Will I become addicted?

Created on 12/08/14 for – Regina Riddle’s - “New Year's Resolution” – Poetry Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Nance Avatar
January 3, 2015 at 8:20 AM
I love it,! Keep breathing! Hope your new year started off great! Hugs!
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January 2, 2015 at 12:33 AM
It is another winning year, congrats Earl ...huggs
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January 2, 2015 at 2:26 AM
Hi KAYOD5, Thank you so much. All we can do is to take one step at a time and one breath at a time, however, I am going to try to drive 2 cars at the same time and perhaps toy with the laws of nature. I hope you have a productive and Happy New Year. Earl
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January 1, 2015 at 5:57 PM
Earl,, Congratulations -- This is a great way to start the new year. Enjoyed reading your winning poem. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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January 2, 2015 at 2:40 AM
Hi Linda. Thank you so much. I wish you the best that life has to offer. I've found that taking one step at a time. (I'm not sure if it is the left or right foot first.) and taking one breath at a time works just fine. Happy New Year! Have a great one. Take care. Earl
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January 1, 2015 at 3:53 PM
I love your poem, Earl...quite humorous but also so very important at the same time! The art of breathing....Congratulations on your win! Happy New Year, Sandra
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January 2, 2015 at 1:37 AM
Hi Sandra, Happy New Year! Thank you so much. They say only 18% of people keep their new years resolutions. I wasn't taking any chances so I went with a simple one. Have a great new year. Take care. Earl
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January 1, 2015 at 1:51 PM
Earl, congratulations on your winning poem. Blessings to you for the coming year
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January 1, 2015 at 2:07 PM
Hi Eve, Thank you so much. Blessings to you too and have a Happy New Year. Take care. Earl
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January 1, 2015 at 12:58 PM
dropping back with my congrats Earl:-) Hugs Jan xxx
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January 1, 2015 at 2:09 PM
Thanks Jan! Happy New Year! Take care. Earl
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December 8, 2014 at 8:37 PM
I want to do the New Year right If I hold my breath too long Will I lose my life? Will I become addicted? Beautiful poem Earl Schumacker,thanks for visiting my page and for nice comment.
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December 8, 2014 at 8:51 PM
Hi Fatima, It was a pleasure reading your unusual poem. Thank you so much for commenting on my silly contribution to this "New Years"poetry contest. I'm glad you enjoyed it. I wish you the best. Keep up your good work. Have a great evening. Take care. Earl
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December 8, 2014 at 3:35 PM
Yes, I find myself holding my breath and then with an explosion -- blow and start breathing again. My resolution is speak less breath more!! Thanks for the reminder -- well written!
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December 8, 2014 at 3:59 PM
Hi David, Thank you for your comments. Resolutions are easy for me to keep. Since breathing is primarily an involuntary action, I should be able to keep this one, without becoming a cumbersome burden on others. Thank you for your words of wisdom. Have a great day. Earl
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December 8, 2014 at 2:52 PM
I intend to keep breathing as long as possible Earl - will breath a sign of relief to see the back of 2014! Good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx
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December 8, 2014 at 3:15 PM
I don't make resolutions so have nothing to break lol:-) Hugs Jan xxx
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December 8, 2014 at 3:10 PM
Hi Jan, Yes. This has been quite the year for you. Lets keep our hopes high for a better one this go round. Keeping resolutions is easy for me so I created something silly and playful here. Take care. Earl
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