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A Little About Myself

Breathing underwater Deep in the arctic Yet my skin grows hotter Bench pressing the weight Of the world without a spotter No creature is scarier Than the human monster Been told to go kill myself By my own loving father Hated and despised By my own blood brother Now you know why I'm Too much of a renegade to act proper Razor blades and grenades Underneath my pillow covers Can't wait for tomorrow And see what I'll discover

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Joshua Abel

Date: 3/11/2015 12:24:00 PM

Worst feeling comes when hatred is being exhibited by those who are very close to you... Sometimes you would feel like, you came into da wrong family.. Buh as she(charmaine) has said, God loves you more..

Sebastian Aaron Baez
Date: 3/11/2015 12:31:00 PM

Thank you Joshua, it sure does feel like I came into the wrong family but I wouldn't be who I am because of it! Life works in mysterious ways!

Emile Pinet

Date: 3/11/2015 12:19:00 PM

The foundation of who you are and how you think is explored within this piece. The words are gentle yet the hurt is real...leaving a feeling of calm acceptance. Emile. #7

Sebastian Aaron Baez
Date: 3/11/2015 12:33:00 PM

Thank you Emile for stopping by and reading, I guess you can say this is my origin story :)

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 3/11/2015 11:58:00 AM

Cont. But that is what makes us stronger in the end.A deep and heartbreaking poem..Charma

Charmaine Chircop
Date: 3/11/2015 12:15:00 PM

It is their loss Seb..One day they realize that dear friend..Till then,keep being you.

Sebastian Aaron Baez
Date: 3/11/2015 12:12:00 PM

Thank you so much for your concern Charmaine but unfortunately those few lines are not fictional. Don't worry I'm fine, if I were to do anything to myself I would've done it long ago and yes it has made me stronger. Thank you again :)

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 3/11/2015 11:57:00 AM

Seb..Im really hoping this is just a dark fiction poem..If it isnt..I just want you to know you are a good guy and God loves you,friends here too..but what is most important is to love yourself for the good person that you are.Family can hurt us at times out of anger,or cuz they dnt know better..time will pass and they regret it...Some pain inflicted by those we love can be unbearable