Pace Ink-U-Script Poet Free verse

A Little About Me

Twenty-eight, and has lived longer than fifty
                                   Need not tell me any fairytales
                                            For I'm an author
                                                      Of
                                                    Many
                                                    
                                                    FALL
                                                 Not short;
                                             For you are walking
                                      Close to the edge, and in due
                           Time, any false move will cause damage to ALL

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Wilma Neels July 5, 2013 at 6:51 AM Pace you say loads with a few words :) enjoy the weekend ahead :) tc Wilma

Harry Horsman October 19, 2012 at 7:13 AM like your message here, Pace, these are wise words of philosophy, awesome...

Lucilla Carrillo August 31, 2012 at 10:52 AM This is good. I like it and I won't tell you any fairytales. You are alright in my book. Lucilla

Doreen Wright July 30, 2012 at 3:32 PM The form, the words, the point...all wonderful!! I love this poem!!

Richard Palmer July 15, 2012 at 8:10 AM Great write,love the shape you inspired me to do my Tree of Life,love your styles,author G "INK",the G stands for great

Poet Destroyer A July 1, 2012 at 8:11 AM ha..i love your first line...your lived 28, but managed 50 = clever line.... :-) look out for that spherical journey. xox~pd

Roberlynn Jones June 27, 2012 at 7:52 AM nice poem

Justcallme Britt June 5, 2012 at 10:32 PM The first line seems true... I like the first upside-down pyramid... I like the following pyramid as well!!! Your not one to be messed with Pace Ink-U-Script June 6, 2012 at 7:38 AM Lol..too funny...Thank you Brittany!!

Laura Breidenthal April 30, 2012 at 1:12 PM Very nice poem into your mind! I also wanted to thank you for your kind comments on my work. It is greatly appreciated. Always, Laura Pace Ink-U-Script April 30, 2012 at 2:26 PM Well thank you!!

Jslambert Mister Roboto April 1, 2012 at 4:04 AM Im from the Ghetto so I'm used ta' that, look on yo muh fuggin map and find Texas and see where Houston at/ It's on the borderline of hard times..." GETO BOYS.....5th Ward...Htown Knockin boot...PeACE Pace Ink-U-Script April 18, 2012 at 4:55 AM Thanks for sharing your comments!!

Bertha Davis March 24, 2012 at 1:39 PM This poem sounds sad. It made me think of my actions and how they relate to those around me. Pace Ink-U-Script April 18, 2012 at 4:55 AM That's good that it made you think beautiful!!!

Charmaine Chircop March 21, 2012 at 10:24 AM So much said here..keep the pen flowing .. Charma Pace Ink-U-Script April 18, 2012 at 4:56 AM Thank you for sharing!!