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A Liquid Caress El

Falling from the skies and eyes Liquid tears caress, baptize Warm souls with serenity Soothing the identity Like clear, rippling streams embrace Poetry and prose with grace Falling from the skies and eyes Poetry Form: 7-lines, 7-syllables each line. The rhyme pattern is AABBCCA. Also, the first and last lines must be the same. An "Elemental" must pertain to the three elements- (earth, water, sky).
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Daniel Avatar
August 1, 2021 at 11:18 PM
Back to congratulate you on a nice win with this soothing write, Gina:)
Pant Avatar
July 31, 2021 at 9:49 AM
Congratulations! Warm souls with serenity Soothing the identity.... Lovely
Alex Avatar
July 31, 2021 at 4:18 AM
A Very beautiful work. Congratulations on your First Placing!
Messina Avatar
July 31, 2021 at 4:02 AM
Soothing and wonderful poetry, Gina, I absolutely love this! Congratulations on your top win. God bless you...Hugs Charlie
Kendrick Avatar
July 9, 2021 at 6:40 AM
I like this form. I might try one. I enjoyed reading it. I do like the photo. I like to see rain or dew droplets. They are miniature mirrors of their surroundings. Your visit to my page was enlightening. Sara
Faulkner Avatar
July 8, 2021 at 8:38 PM
This is so soothing, just like a gentle rain, best wishes for the contest!
Rose  Avatar
July 6, 2021 at 1:36 PM
I so totally love the title, and the content of your poem, Liquid indeed, what else could claim me so easily dear friend, Nicely done :)
Allison Avatar
July 6, 2021 at 12:34 PM
wow ive not seen the contest it looks challenging, this is a delightful poem Regina:-) hugs jan xx
Daniel Avatar
July 5, 2021 at 9:42 PM
Nice work, Gina:)
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