A Line In the Sand

There is simply a line drawn in the sand
Tracing a route from the sea to the land
Sometimes it swirls around and around
Telling it's story without any sound

Here it is broken, then badly mended
It doesn't stop, the shore has not ended
Then come the letters as big as a whale
Spelling a name is just part of this tale

It's Wiggling now this way and back
The miniature footprints are easy to track
A tell tale sign that there's children about
That they're having fun, there can be no doubt

The beach is a page, a spade for a pen
We write sand-castle, again and again
The line runs between them, now it's a track
Imaginary train line, clickety clack

The line on the beach means, "please can we stay"
We turn to the kids and then finally say,
(as the sun starts to dip, and sadly we go)
"We'll do it again tomorrow you know"







Contest : Line
8th Place
Contest : featured poem of the week... 
2nd place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
September 21, 2011 at 1:03 PM
Congratulations in the contest of P. D. "Featured Poem of The Week" Nick. Love, Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
September 17, 2011 at 4:56 PM
CONGRATS NICK ON A SUPER SECOND PLACE WIN IN FEATURED POEMS CONTEST WITH THIS RARE BEAUTY LUV..
Jones Avatar
September 17, 2011 at 12:58 PM
Oh, Nick, this is soooo sweet! Recalls memories of some wonderful days to me.. thanks for the write and grats on the win!~n
Merryman Avatar
September 17, 2011 at 12:09 PM
Congrats on your win, Nick! Kim
Poet Avatar
September 17, 2011 at 10:59 AM
Congratulations Nick!An excellent poem here ...love it.
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 17, 2011 at 9:34 AM
A truly delightful entry and read! Congratulations on your deserving win.
Mehta Avatar
September 17, 2011 at 8:22 AM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of P.D. nick
Nair Avatar
September 17, 2011 at 4:49 AM
congrats on the win...
Ramsdale Avatar
September 17, 2011 at 3:43 AM
Congratulations! CR
Helbaoui Avatar
September 17, 2011 at 2:28 AM
This is very nice... I like most the last part. :) congratulations on your superb win
A   Avatar
September 17, 2011 at 1:48 AM
NICK, i see a row of congratulations... wow! triple me a combo...lol... congratulations... a super joy to see this one in my contest,, have a wonderful weekend,.. LINDA
Brown Avatar
January 21, 2011 at 4:54 AM
I am stopping by this morning to read your amazing poetry, and to thank you for your kind comments on mine Nick. Love, Carol
Eggins Avatar
October 1, 2010 at 6:14 AM
Congrates on having your poem featured this week Nick and Congrates on the win I see, well done Bravo love Jayne
Maverick Avatar
September 30, 2010 at 3:18 PM
pure clear joy! will look at more of your poems
Locksley Avatar
September 29, 2010 at 1:52 PM
This is a very original entry for the "lines" contest, Nick. Lines can be straight or jagged, swirling or wiggling. Nice use of rhyme too. Congratulations on your win in the contest, Diane
A  Avatar
September 29, 2010 at 8:42 AM
NICK, CoNGRATULATIoNS oN HAVING YoUR PoEM FEATURED THIS WEEK*luv~SKAT
A   Avatar
September 29, 2010 at 8:37 AM
Hello! Nick again, CONGRATULATIONS on your wonderful poem being featured this week. Enjoyed the selection of all the poetry on the front page. Have yourself a nice and wonderful day,..p.d."
Hickman Avatar
September 29, 2010 at 3:41 AM
This one draws a lovely picture of happy days with children on a sandy beach, so well written and constructed Nick, made me smile, and brought back memories with nostalgia. Well done indeed. Gordon, (hicky)
A   Avatar
September 28, 2010 at 2:35 AM
A nice and wonderful flow , enjoyed your poem,..p.d.
Raza Avatar
September 28, 2010 at 1:11 AM
WONDERFUL. This is fantastic. regards
Kendrick Avatar
September 27, 2010 at 2:07 PM
Great warm and loving write..Enjoyed reading your work..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Sara
Brown Avatar
September 27, 2010 at 6:50 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this weekNick . Love, Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
September 26, 2010 at 2:48 PM
Congrats Nick on your featured poem this week on the soup.. a nice one to share with us all.. with luv my friend...
Dietrich Avatar
September 24, 2010 at 7:49 PM
This is very very sweet, Nick. I take it you won in the contest. Congratulations to YOU> What a great write. LUv, Andrea
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 24, 2010 at 12:08 PM
Nick, Everyones entry is so diverse. I loved where you went with this poem. Wonderful imagery! Congratulations on your win! Aloha, Connie
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