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A Line In the Sand

There is simply a line drawn in the sand Tracing a route from the sea to the land Sometimes it swirls around and around Telling it's story without any sound Here it is broken, then badly mended It doesn't stop, the shore has not ended Then come the letters as big as a whale Spelling a name is just part of this tale It's Wiggling now this way and back The miniature footprints are easy to track A tell tale sign that there's children about That they're having fun, there can be no doubt The beach is a page, a spade for a pen We write sand-castle, again and again The line runs between them, now it's a track Imaginary train line, clickety clack The line on the beach means, "please can we stay" We turn to the kids and then finally say, (as the sun starts to dip, and sadly we go) "We'll do it again tomorrow you know" Contest : Line 8th Place Contest : featured poem of the week... 2nd place

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Date: 9/21/2011 1:03:00 PM
Congratulations in the contest of P. D. "Featured Poem of The Week" Nick. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/17/2011 4:56:00 PM
CONGRATS NICK ON A SUPER SECOND PLACE WIN IN FEATURED POEMS CONTEST WITH THIS RARE BEAUTY LUV..
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Date: 9/17/2011 12:58:00 PM
Oh, Nick, this is soooo sweet! Recalls memories of some wonderful days to me.. thanks for the write and grats on the win!~n
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Date: 9/17/2011 12:09:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Nick! Kim
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Date: 9/17/2011 10:59:00 AM
Congratulations Nick!An excellent poem here ...love it.
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Date: 9/17/2011 9:34:00 AM
A truly delightful entry and read! Congratulations on your deserving win.
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Date: 9/17/2011 8:22:00 AM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of P.D. nick
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Date: 9/17/2011 4:49:00 AM
congrats on the win...
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Date: 9/17/2011 3:43:00 AM
Congratulations! CR
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Date: 9/17/2011 2:28:00 AM
This is very nice... I like most the last part. :) congratulations on your superb win
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Date: 9/17/2011 1:48:00 AM
NICK, i see a row of congratulations... wow! triple me a combo...lol... congratulations... a super joy to see this one in my contest,, have a wonderful weekend,.. LINDA
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Date: 1/21/2011 4:54:00 AM
I am stopping by this morning to read your amazing poetry, and to thank you for your kind comments on mine Nick. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/1/2010 6:14:00 AM
Congrates on having your poem featured this week Nick and Congrates on the win I see, well done Bravo love Jayne
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Date: 9/30/2010 3:18:00 PM
pure clear joy! will look at more of your poems
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Date: 9/29/2010 1:52:00 PM
This is a very original entry for the "lines" contest, Nick. Lines can be straight or jagged, swirling or wiggling. Nice use of rhyme too. Congratulations on your win in the contest, Diane
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Date: 9/29/2010 8:42:00 AM
NICK, CoNGRATULATIoNS oN HAVING YoUR PoEM FEATURED THIS WEEK*luv~SKAT
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Date: 9/29/2010 8:37:00 AM
Hello! Nick again, CONGRATULATIONS on your wonderful poem being featured this week. Enjoyed the selection of all the poetry on the front page. Have yourself a nice and wonderful day,..p.d."
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Date: 9/29/2010 3:41:00 AM
This one draws a lovely picture of happy days with children on a sandy beach, so well written and constructed Nick, made me smile, and brought back memories with nostalgia. Well done indeed. Gordon, (hicky)
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Date: 9/28/2010 2:35:00 AM
A nice and wonderful flow , enjoyed your poem,..p.d.
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Date: 9/28/2010 1:11:00 AM
WONDERFUL. This is fantastic. regards
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Date: 9/27/2010 2:07:00 PM
Great warm and loving write..Enjoyed reading your work..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Sara
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Date: 9/27/2010 6:50:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this weekNick . Love, Carol
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Date: 9/26/2010 2:48:00 PM
Congrats Nick on your featured poem this week on the soup.. a nice one to share with us all.. with luv my friend...
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Date: 9/24/2010 7:49:00 PM
This is very very sweet, Nick. I take it you won in the contest. Congratulations to YOU> What a great write. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 9/24/2010 12:08:00 PM
Nick, Everyones entry is so diverse. I loved where you went with this poem. Wonderful imagery! Congratulations on your win! Aloha, Connie
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