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A Lilit Poem - Evolution

EVOLUTION
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Waves crash, ripples calm.
Calm the raging sea!

Sea: Evolution starts!
First life, no hearts; no but,
flora imparts fresh air.
New life can strut, were nearly there!

There is some time yet!
Yet to come, mankind!

Mankind, a big faux pas
The worse by far you'll twig.
Yes a faux pas, a mess!
A self made rig, pollution, stress!

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This lilit composed using the example as a guide, please check link:

http://poetscollective.org/poetryforms/lilit/

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Tom Cunningham February 16, 2018 at 4:52 PM From a gurgling blob to where we are today, but did we take a wrong turn somewhere. ? Tom Mick Talbot February 16, 2018 at 6:04 PM In a nutshell 2 come mind; the industrial revolution, and religion. N.B. The nutshell? Coconut sized, and the reasons it contains are manyfold, indeed a many-forked road! Mick