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A Lil Humor

The elderly couple enjoyed a lovely meal with their dear friends.
The two old ladies get up to do the dishes when the meal ends.
The two men chat, one tells of a restaurant he could recommend.
They had a really nice meal last night, good food not much to spend.
“That sounds great” said one “What’ is this restaurant’s name?” 
He thought a while, searching his memory trying hard, but in vain.
He said, “I can’t think, what is that flower the one that makes a chain?”
Oh, said his friend I’m not sure, Is it a daisy or should I think again?
You smile. I guess this means I’m on the right track, did I get it right? 
That’s it!“Hey Daisy he called “what’s the name of the place we went last night?”
Same couple planned a dinner.  Daisy went to buy sauce for stroganoff.
Asked an employee where it would be. He replied, “I’ll see” and walked off
He didn’t return so she asked another, and she replied, “I’ll see” and went to see.
Daisy was tired of waiting for them to return and found it herself in Isle C .
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Fowler Avatar
July 9, 2023 at 1:38 PM
Cuteness! I recognize you as my friend. What is your name again? :)
Volumes Avatar
July 9, 2023 at 11:38 PM
lol heheheheh I am Sevvie. remember me now ? My LAF I cant forget you my Lovely Awesome Friend.
Gorelick Avatar
July 3, 2023 at 6:47 PM
I may be getting old, but let me tell you, my mind's as sharp as a _as a _ what do you call that short nail with the flat head? Anyway, loved your narrative!
Volumes Avatar
July 3, 2023 at 8:10 PM
Oh Robert I tack it your memory is going too It happens to the best of us, but I am training my memory to forget the bad stuff and remember the good. It does get confusing like when I blue the birthday cake out and wished for a slim bank account and fat body :( Sigh. ) Thanx for the comment. Cheers or is it Chairs ? OK enough, SV has left the building.
Narain Avatar
July 2, 2023 at 10:30 AM
Cute poem. Two smiles from me.
Volumes Avatar
July 2, 2023 at 12:22 PM
Jay this is entered in your contest. Does your comment on here disqualify me ? Hehehe I read your requirements looking for instruction about the title and found none so i soup mailed you to ask how to title an entry in your contest. oh well glad you like my humor. Heheheheheh Thank you Jay.
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July 1, 2023 at 8:19 PM
This exquisitely crafted, humorous, and thought-provoking poem, my dear, VS, has evoked a wondrous smile upon my countenance. I extend my deepest gratitude for the delightful mirth it has bestowed upon me.
Volumes Avatar
July 1, 2023 at 9:35 PM
Kinda cute aren't they ? Love your comment. Glad you enjoyed and let me know. Thank you my friend.
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