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A Lightness of Hunger

is what what is... what is what is what is now...now... all the whens and the might have beens... a captivating time space wonderland called...the now... a stability without hunger to consume and fill all from an emptiness void stan sand

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M. L. Kiser

Date: 1/17/2019 12:14:00 PM

This was brilliant! "a captivating time space wonderland called...the now..." a favorite line of mine.

Sand Blown
Date: 1/17/2019 1:53:00 PM

thanks M.L...we fill the now with so much that it's difficult to know what 'now' is

Constance La France

Date: 1/17/2019 9:12:00 AM

Stan, I love your Fibonacci, so creative and thought-provoking with what was, might have been and the now. A Fav for me ~

Sand Blown
Date: 1/17/2019 11:41:00 AM

thanks dear heart...the now without a hunger to fill it with a 'nothingness' is like a treasure

Vera Duggan

Date: 1/16/2019 6:54:00 PM

As Harry said very clever poem and very interesting, I might try that style, thank you for sharing and take care......Vera

Sand Blown
Date: 1/16/2019 8:03:00 PM

thanks Vera...what when where and why always were a good shovel to dig with : )

Harry Horsman

Date: 1/16/2019 3:58:00 PM

Clever poem, leaves a lot to the imagination.

Sand Blown
Date: 1/16/2019 8:01:00 PM

thanks harry...questions get me up in the mornining : )