Sand Blown Poet Fibonacci

A Lightness of Hunger

is
what
what is...
what is what
is what is now...now...
all the whens and the might have beens...
a captivating time space wonderland called...the now...
a stability without hunger to consume and fill all from an emptiness void


stan sand

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Annie Lander June 2, 2025 at 11:14 AM a well capture piece profound

M. L. Kiser January 17, 2019 at 12:14 PM This was brilliant! "a captivating time space wonderland called...the now..." a favorite line of mine. Sand Blown January 17, 2019 at 1:53 PM thanks M.L...we fill the now with so much that it's difficult to know what 'now' is

Constance La France January 17, 2019 at 9:12 AM Stan, I love your Fibonacci, so creative and thought-provoking with what was, might have been and the now. A Fav for me ~ Sand Blown January 17, 2019 at 11:41 AM thanks dear heart...the now without a hunger to fill it with a 'nothingness' is like a treasure

Vera Duggan January 16, 2019 at 6:54 PM As Harry said very clever poem and very interesting, I might try that style, thank you for sharing and take care......Vera Sand Blown January 16, 2019 at 8:03 PM thanks Vera...what when where and why always were a good shovel to dig with : )

Harry Horsman January 16, 2019 at 3:58 PM Clever poem, leaves a lot to the imagination. Sand Blown January 16, 2019 at 8:01 PM thanks harry...questions get me up in the mornining : )