A light once shone

in the near darkness of your divine mind’s slow deterioration I now and then see the light which once shone there

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Paul Callus

Date: 7/25/2024 10:54:00 AM

A very good delivery of a Suzette Prime form, Terry. The subject tackled is touching, to say the least! Congratulations on your win. // paul

Terry Miller
Date: 8/17/2024 9:10:00 AM

Thank you Paul

Len Gasun

Date: 7/25/2024 9:54:00 AM

Very beautiful and uplifting suzette prime poem you've penned my dear poet friend. Congratulations as well on your win! Thanks for sharing. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs

Terry Miller
Date: 8/17/2024 9:10:00 AM

Thank you so much

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/25/2024 6:15:00 AM

Very nice winner. Way to go. Congratulations on your win. Sara K..It is sad to see a family member or friend deteriorating from some form of illness or dementia.

Terry Miller
Date: 8/17/2024 9:11:00 AM

Thank you Sara

Beata Agustin

Date: 7/24/2024 10:02:00 PM

Wow! Congratulations! Thanks for sharing this muse of yours... so wisdom-filled. God bless you.

Terry Miller
Date: 7/25/2024 3:17:00 AM

Thank you so much

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/18/2024 9:40:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your write. Have a blessed day writing away.................

Terry Miller
Date: 7/25/2024 3:18:00 AM

Thank you so much Paula