A light once shone

in the
near darkness
of your divine mind’s
slow deterioration
I now and then see the light which once shone there
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Callus Avatar
July 25, 2024 at 10:54 AM
A very good delivery of a Suzette Prime form, Terry. The subject tackled is touching, to say the least! Congratulations on your win. // paul
Miller Avatar
August 17, 2024 at 9:10 AM
Thank you Paul
Gasun Avatar
July 25, 2024 at 9:54 AM
Very beautiful and uplifting suzette prime poem you've penned my dear poet friend. Congratulations as well on your win! Thanks for sharing. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs
Miller Avatar
August 17, 2024 at 9:10 AM
Thank you so much
Kendrick Avatar
July 25, 2024 at 6:15 AM
Very nice winner. Way to go. Congratulations on your win. Sara K..It is sad to see a family member or friend deteriorating from some form of illness or dementia.
Miller Avatar
August 17, 2024 at 9:11 AM
Thank you Sara
Agustin Avatar
July 24, 2024 at 10:02 PM
Wow! Congratulations! Thanks for sharing this muse of yours... so wisdom-filled. God bless you.
Miller Avatar
July 25, 2024 at 3:17 AM
Thank you so much
Goldsmith Avatar
July 18, 2024 at 9:40 AM
I enjoyed reading your write. Have a blessed day writing away.................
Miller Avatar
July 25, 2024 at 3:18 AM
Thank you so much Paula
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