A Life Well Spent

A day long ago 
Life was free and easy
Life was a whimsical carefree bliss
To breathe gentle and uninhibiting breezes  
To feel emotionless
When painless laughter was to be had
When simplicity came easily 
I was a child.

Together we saw orchards of sweetly ripen grapes 
And orange suns sinking into the oceans blue green wake
Though old and grey 
We both may be 
The years are just a notch in time
Of the whole world this may be true
But please my friend 
As I pass on 
Do justice to the life I once led
Keep alive in your heart 
The memories of a life well spent.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Krutsinger Avatar
August 15, 2020 at 6:27 PM
An optimistic attitude that gives your loved ones permission to live on.
Sikorski Avatar
September 6, 2020 at 4:43 AM
Thank you Caren. I wrote this many years ago for my boyfriend who died at 19 from leukemia. This poem is very personal to me. I was 17 at the time and this was all I had to give ..my words. I thank you for reading it and allowing me to know your thoughts on my work !!!! Kim
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