A Life That Changed

Here ends a life that never was Lord, I thank you for your love In the morn, my soul will ascend A snow white turtle dove When you sleep, your dreams alight You’re free from guilt and fear When you awake in the dead of night My screams are all you hear Then like an angel from high above A black cloaked figure stood “He heard your words of thanks for love and has acted as he should” The angelic priest then took her hand And lifted her on high It was then she heard the heavenly band And knew her time was nigh The Lord was there to greet her “My child your faith held strong may you serve for a while longer and join the spiritual throng” He sent her back down to a part of France Where Our Lady once appeared And taking up this one last chance A blue clad person neared “Hi I’m Lucy” the person said Her voice so soft and true She turned to smile, her graceful head Noticing the crowd of blue This was where her true heart lie In the place of penance and love Where in the morn she did release Her snow white turtle dove.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 8/19/2012 9:27:00 AM
Absolutely amazing write. It held me spell bound. Keep writting.
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Date: 8/3/2012 11:23:00 AM
Amazing poem Shelley well done really enjoyed reading this. Well done on winning the competition xxx <3
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Date: 4/22/2012 12:34:00 PM
Welcome to P-Soup Shelley, lovely written poem. - oxox Anne-Lise
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Shelley Murray-Foreman
Date: 4/22/2012 12:35:00 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise.
Date: 4/22/2012 3:43:00 AM
Absolutely amazing poem, I was blown away, well done Shelley.
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Date: 4/21/2012 9:17:00 PM
I agree with Catie. a Very lovely poem!!
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Date: 4/22/2012 12:36:00 PM
Thank you Andrea. It's nice to share it.
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