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A Life Taken Too Soon

A picturesque bed of flowers but you shined the most Strong, beautiful, vivid and zestful A golden soul so restful The envious angels picked you. Sad tears glowed like raindrops The garden became a corpse Snatched abruptly from this life Alone as an abandoned beehive Only comforted with memories alive 17-03-2018 ~2ND Place~ Contest: Ten Lines, Five Words III Sponsor: Laura Loo Judged: 03/21/2018

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Date: 3/30/2018 4:49:00 AM
Blessings and sincere congratulations on your fine win, Natasha - all the best to you, my friend! :-)
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Natasha Turner
Date: 3/30/2018 10:21:00 AM
Thanks Greg :)
Date: 3/27/2018 8:54:00 AM
Wonderful poem. Congrats on your win, Natasha.
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Natasha Turner
Date: 3/27/2018 11:21:00 AM
Thanks :) :)
Date: 3/21/2018 7:52:00 AM
The garden became a corpse...great line! Congrats, Natasha!
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Natasha Turner
Date: 3/21/2018 9:55:00 AM
Thanks Kim :)
Date: 3/21/2018 5:56:00 AM
wonderfully expressed poem, thank you and congrats :)-luloo
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Natasha Turner
Date: 3/21/2018 6:52:00 AM
Thanks :)
Date: 3/17/2018 4:11:00 PM
A sad tale of loss Natasha, Beautifuly done. Tom
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Natasha Turner
Date: 3/18/2018 12:05:00 AM
Thanks :)

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