Natasha Turner Poet Free verse

A Life Taken Too Soon

A picturesque bed of flowers
but you shined the most
Strong, beautiful, vivid and zestful
A golden soul so restful
The envious angels picked you.
Sad tears glowed like raindrops
The garden became a corpse
Snatched abruptly from this life
Alone as an abandoned beehive
Only comforted with memories alive
17-03-2018

~2ND Place~
Contest: Ten Lines, Five Words III
Sponsor: Laura Loo
Judged: 03/21/2018

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Gregory Richard Barden March 30, 2018 at 4:49 AM Blessings and sincere congratulations on your fine win, Natasha - all the best to you, my friend! :-) Natasha Turner March 30, 2018 at 10:21 AM Thanks Greg :)

Line Gauthier March 27, 2018 at 8:54 AM Wonderful poem. Congrats on your win, Natasha. Natasha Turner March 27, 2018 at 11:21 AM Thanks :) :)

Kim Rodrigues March 21, 2018 at 7:52 AM The garden became a corpse...great line! Congrats, Natasha! Natasha Turner March 21, 2018 at 9:55 AM Thanks Kim :)

Beautiful Scars March 21, 2018 at 5:56 AM wonderfully expressed poem, thank you and congrats :)-luloo Natasha Turner March 21, 2018 at 6:52 AM Thanks :)

Tom Cunningham March 17, 2018 at 4:11 PM A sad tale of loss Natasha, Beautifuly done. Tom Natasha Turner March 18, 2018 at 12:05 AM Thanks :)