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I am living a life of Zen, that flows to pen; poems of peace, in quiesce ... and in daily meditation, seek creation; of boundless thoughts, ~ parade of ought's ... I embrace my beginners mind, for I was blind; to calm feelings, ... and life's ceilings_ ________________ July 19, 2021 Poetry/Rhyme/A Life of Zen Copyright Protected, ID 07-1374-294-19 All Rights Reserved, 2021, Constance La France Written for the Standard contest, 12 lines in Rhyme sponsor, Joseph May, Judged 07/25/2021 First Place

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Date: 7/28/2021 5:09:00 AM
Excellent, Constance! It is good to get thoughts under control. I love the second verse. Though divided up, bleeds together as in: seek creation of boundless thoughts. Congratulations!
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Date: 7/28/2021 6:53:00 AM
Kim, thanks for the visit and the compliment, the comment and congratulations ~ love and serenity _Constance
Date: 7/27/2021 9:34:00 AM
Lovely as gentle rainfall or a morning mist Constance. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 7/27/2021 2:27:00 PM
Sam, thank for the nice comment and the compliment and congratulations ~ love and serenity _Constance
Date: 7/26/2021 9:58:00 AM
Zen life is supposed to be one of calmness amidst all disturbances and worries. Your work expresses it in few words. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 7/26/2021 1:56:00 PM
Christuraj, thank you for the comment, compliment and congratulations ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
Date: 7/26/2021 9:53:00 AM
WoW! BW, I like the message in this write. Congratulations on your 1st place win. It was well deserved. Have a great day:-) Alexis
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Date: 7/26/2021 1:57:00 PM
Alexis, thanks for the compliment and congratulations and comment, appreciate ~ love and serenity _Constance
Date: 7/26/2021 9:30:00 AM
A BIG congrats on your win, Constance. Janice
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Date: 7/26/2021 9:31:00 AM
Janice, thanks for the congrats, appreciate ~ love and serenity ~ Constance
Date: 7/26/2021 5:53:00 AM
Wonderful write Constance, Congrats on your win
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Date: 7/26/2021 9:06:00 AM
Joseph, thank you for the inspiration and the contest and my great placement and for the compliment and congrats ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
Date: 7/20/2021 11:38:00 AM
Beautiful write. All the best for contest
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Date: 7/20/2021 11:40:00 AM
Rama, thanks for the compliment and the encouragement ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
Date: 7/19/2021 7:54:00 PM
Beautiful lines, Constance. So peaceful and quiet...lovely.
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Date: 7/20/2021 11:41:00 AM
Milt, thank you for the compliment ~ serenity and tranquility _Constance

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