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Darren White   Date:  5/27/2017 11.24pm

VERY original Art, it's like art :) and I like it a lot.

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Darren White   Date:  5/27/2017 11.27pm

How come my comments show here? Whats up with that?

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Seren Roberts   Date:  5/27/2017 11.50pm

Am I in dream land? very creative friend.

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White Avatar
May 28, 2017 at 11:47 PM
This was so funny and original :D We had so much fun while Arthur was posting this poem, it's cool :)
May Avatar
May 28, 2017 at 8:42 PM
Comments make good poems and art work too..Nicely done
Smith Avatar
May 28, 2017 at 8:12 AM
No comment...lol...it reads great both front and back...when you go to Kingsbridge bring me Alinea.
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May 28, 2017 at 8:44 PM
Ok Jack!
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May 28, 2017 at 4:01 AM
Said it before you are a creative genius. Oh how clever I LOVE IT!!!!:-) of course its not the first time I've seen folks comment on their own poems !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!lol lol lol:-) hugs Jan xx
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May 28, 2017 at 8:44 PM
You forgot to capitalize genius!!! LOL thanks Jan!
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May 28, 2017 at 12:10 AM
What a twist with your magic mirror Art.
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May 28, 2017 at 8:43 PM
Thanks Jean, when I did this Darren just happened to be online, and we both were laughing so hard!!!
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May 27, 2017 at 11:22 PM
Life so brittle
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May 27, 2017 at 11:21 PM
People with comments
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May 27, 2017 at 11:19 PM
Advice and spittle
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May 27, 2017 at 11:18 PM
Erasing what's said
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May 27, 2017 at 11:16 PM
Is like being dead
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May 27, 2017 at 11:15 PM
In this world of fake
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May 27, 2017 at 11:14 PM
Comments stay in this poem
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May 27, 2017 at 11:13 PM
Written in May
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May 27, 2017 at 11:12 PM
Forever
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May 27, 2017 at 11:10 PM
.............
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May 27, 2017 at 11:09 PM
Empathy in words
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May 27, 2017 at 11:08 PM
Kind hearts spoken
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May 27, 2017 at 11:05 PM
Encouragement I splurge.
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May 27, 2017 at 11:05 PM
Poetic confessions
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May 27, 2017 at 11:04 PM
Readers absolve the obsessions'
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May 27, 2017 at 11:03 PM
In Kingsbridge
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May 27, 2017 at 11:02 PM
Surely they learned their lessons
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