A Life Lost

 Angel of mine, where are you now? Hours drift away like seconds as I

Lift my somber heart and head to the heavens asking, "why, oh why?"
In one moment, your tired eyes held my gaze; then, with one kiss goodbye, 
Frozen in time, forever you were gone; a failing heart will surely die,
Existing in flesh no more; yet our love surpasses death and the tears I cry.

Losing you again tonight in fragments of dreams, a heart shatters. I rely
On the memory of your smile at dawn, the scent of your pillow, your sigh
Swept softly across my ear lobe in whispers of love. I know, my tears will dry
Tomorrow under blue sky when I see you twinkle in our little boy's eye.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 8/10/2012 6:35:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Susan's "Lost" contest Rhonda. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/9/2012 8:52:00 PM
rohnda.. congratulations with your awesome win. Hoping to read many contest tonight. always~ ;-) PD
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Date: 8/8/2012 5:35:00 PM
This was an incredibly sad and intense acrostic, Rhonda. I felt the emotions from your loss in every expression of the depths of your despair and loss. Congratulations on a well deserved win. How achingly painful to see your lost love in the eye of the child you bore with him. ::gentle hugs:: Lucretia xx
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Date: 8/8/2012 3:29:00 PM
Oh, my, the top winners are both so sad on the same theme but so lovely. Congrats on your most deserved win.
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Date: 8/8/2012 2:43:00 PM
Congrats Rhinda on your lovely win.
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Date: 8/8/2012 2:14:00 PM
This is so tender Rhonda. Great win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 8/8/2012 1:10:00 PM
So sad and touching. Congratulations on this win. Lee
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Date: 8/8/2012 10:12:00 AM
Congrats on your win in my contest! so touching, especially the 2nd line of your 2nd verse :)
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Date: 8/2/2012 8:51:00 AM
Rhonda an excellent write, just flows from the beginning, I like ...David
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Date: 8/2/2012 5:22:00 AM
A beauty Rhonda, one can feel the emotion flowing through your lines, hope your week is a good one :) love & blessings Wilma
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Date: 8/1/2012 9:43:00 PM
Wow, this is a very touching write my friend! I was caught off guard to its overwhelming beauty it bestowed! Thank you for writing such a meaningful poem, I know it will do well in Susan's contest! What a wonderful piece, Great Work!!
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