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A Lie Is a Try

A lie is a try at superiority An attempt to hide insecurity What it seeks to conceal it reveals

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022




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Date: 5/24/2022 2:42:00 PM
Wisdom... is so few words. Excellent work. Ann
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Date: 5/24/2022 1:20:00 PM
Lies are hard; who can remember them? I can't.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 5/24/2022 2:06:00 PM
You can't remember lies. Our Presidents can't remember the truth... Oh, well...
Date: 5/23/2022 12:24:00 AM
A lie is always a lie. I liked your rhyme, Gershon. That's the truth.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 5/23/2022 5:06:00 PM
Ha, ha. Glad you came around to the truth, Shirley! Cheers, Gershon
Date: 5/22/2022 9:24:00 PM
A lie self destructs. Brilliant writing, Gershon.
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Date: 5/23/2022 5:06:00 PM
The problem with a lie is he who tells it tries to justify...
Date: 5/22/2022 3:42:00 PM
Truth in all…lol! Often, too, a gruff response! All sorts of ways to attempt to control.
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Date: 5/22/2022 5:45:00 PM
Yeah. It is a control thing, isn't it?! Thanks for the insight, Kim. :)
Date: 5/22/2022 10:30:00 AM
Absolutely true, gw.
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Date: 5/22/2022 5:44:00 PM
Absotively, posilutely! :)
Date: 5/22/2022 8:06:00 AM
How true your rhyme....what is desperately being concealed is furtively revealed. Great Write! :)Paulette
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 5/22/2022 5:44:00 PM
Your comment is better than my poem. Wonderful wit, Paulette. Thanks for sharing. :) gw
Date: 5/22/2022 3:10:00 AM
A twisted mind almost always twists the truth to a most unrecognizable face. A profound write G.W...ab
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 5/22/2022 5:42:00 PM
Thanks for your kind words, Anselmo. Hope all is well. :) Gershon
Date: 5/21/2022 11:21:00 PM
There's wisdom in this poem, Gershon. Thanks for sharing, Bill
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 5/22/2022 5:38:00 PM
Just hope I haven't emptied my pen of wisdom in one spurt! Thanks, Bill! Ride easy, Gershon

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