A Letter Unsent



If only you knew why I gave you up 
You would not stew or stare at me 
With those cold eyes of a stranger 

If only you knew how I held you
     close to my breaking heart 
Comforting your tiny tears with mine 
You would not throw at me 
      those icy daggers of yours 

If only you knew that I love you 
As much as any mother loves her child 
You would consider me yours 

If only you knew the visions I had 
Of us living, loving and laughing together 
You would forgive me for not being able to 

If only you knew the reason for my silence 
We would be having dinner tonight 
In the peace of our home 

If only you knew what you'll never know
I could somehow forgive myself 
Or forget my miserable misery 

If only you knew...




10.22.2020

For Silent One's "If only you knew" contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Thomas Avatar
December 2, 2020 at 3:13 PM
I cannot fathom that pain Jo... I don't even know what to say. Beautiful
Andresen Avatar
October 27, 2020 at 8:47 AM
- Heartbreaking poem, Jo - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Roper Avatar
October 26, 2020 at 8:46 PM
Congratulations, Jo , on your win! Hugs Eve
Seeker Avatar
October 26, 2020 at 8:46 PM
Beautiful! Yet, love be like the fragrance of a flower! Unconditional and ceaselessly outpouring :) congrats!
Koplin Avatar
October 26, 2020 at 5:22 PM
Congratulations on your win!
Y. Avatar
October 26, 2020 at 9:42 AM
Hi Jo, I’m just coming back to say congratulations on your placement in the contest-Alexis
One Avatar
October 26, 2020 at 9:19 AM
This is heartbreaking Jo.. Full of emotions.. Congratulations on your placement..
Mcintosh Avatar
October 22, 2020 at 9:19 AM
Powerful and filled with tears of sadness that beckon from a tender, tired heart. This is so sad and so beautifully done, at the same time. I love your words but feel moved beyond words at the anguish. God bless you
Buhagiar Avatar
October 22, 2020 at 9:06 AM
Such a sad situation when love is not returned as it should. Loved your poem. Jo. ~~
Y. Avatar
October 22, 2020 at 6:51 AM
WoW! You have penned such a sad and heartbreaking story. A child may feel unloved by their mother, not realizing that the mother showed ultimate act of love... sacrifice. This is a winner in my book. Best wishes in the contest. Have a wonderful day- Alexis
Pandit Avatar
October 22, 2020 at 6:47 AM
This poem tugs my heart. Quite an evocative write, Jo. Worthy of TOP win.
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