A Letter To My Distant Lover

A LETTER TO MY DISTANT LOVER

Dear friend,

I wish a gentle wind could rise from my deep self
and blow towards you humming my deepest wishes
on freely swaying tree branches
along the cool banks of a river which neighbors your home
and perhaps the birds nesting on a forest hunching above the river
would compose them into madrigals
and go perch on a Mosu tree by your home; singing for you
I wish an evening offshore breeze could carry my wishes along
through the gentle nights of Ramotswa towards you
and invade your midnight dreams
Dear friend, I always long to see you again
and sit there with you just to while away time
I, secretly scanning for love through lenses of your eyes

Your distant lover

Signed.

Date Posted: 05 January 2014

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 2/7/2016 12:24:00 AM
PT B, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 1/18/2015 4:29:00 PM
Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 1/18/2015 3:15:00 PM
Congratulations on a well-deserved win for this sweet romantic write! Pandita
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Date: 1/17/2015 1:12:00 PM
oh what a wonderful letter to receive - many congrats on your win:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 1/17/2015 5:01:00 AM
Congrats on this fine romantic write,
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