A Letter To Mrs. Frankenstein Phd

Tonight I speak to you,
with a sober mind that
keeps my memories vivid,
and a melancholy mood
that reflects the deepest
darkest depths of my
dangerous depression,
Sealed with heartache

 Stamped with the hurtful
indiscretions of a man made
ignorant by the reality of a 
loss that eradicated his soul,
Be it prudent to allow my
reminiscence to fade into 
the infinite background of
forgotten brooded teenage angst

My memories are empowered
by love, and by such an emotion,
have denied my will and become
personified to the point of eternal
embodiment, grabbing my tongue
and squeezing out ink used to
express the immortal affection of
its own first and only creed,

Thus by the mutual compassion
once held by our hearts alike,
The monster of your imagination
was born to a world incapable of
comprehending the love of a 
creature for the love of his creator,
A creature who hides his face
for he is hideous without you,

Crushed by the harrowing
lightening strike of being 
condemned to a life without
the bolt of love that gave him
breath, he becomes the lost,
Yet he devotedly searches for you,
as I do, as we both breakdown
screaming and crying out loud,
in harmony, "Creator, please...
Love me again.."

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 11/12/2010 7:52:00 PM
Your words always have such impact and realism in a way that amazes me each time I read your pieces, you have desire and devotion for sure and talent,,well that goes without saying, you have showed feelings of Frankenstein fantastically,,anyone who ever really and truly watched the movie instead of being scared, the message within is glorious of love and wanting love from their creator to which every spiritual human desires as well,,Thank You again for reading and your comments,,Blessings,cecil
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Date: 11/9/2010 8:54:00 PM
remember always beauty needs an animal to breath. this was powerful work my dear friend! you never cease to amaze me with your work. so many scrumptious lines my mind feasted upon in this poem. it was a very creative piece worthy of much applause. the last line was so heartbreaking and so true for both the world in this poem and in our everyday world in life. you will go far Audonus, your words tell us that much. may there be so many more pieces of equal greatness for you. --madison
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Date: 11/8/2010 6:05:00 PM
PASSIONATE! no better words to say it.
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Date: 11/7/2010 9:30:00 AM
You my new friend are a true talent.. This is a wondeful piece you have written... And once again you are to kind with your coments..a philospher?? thats a first.. but like you I would love to hear it on the radio.... thanks again... my artist friend.. Michael
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Date: 11/6/2010 7:31:00 PM
A truly wonderful poem. Thanks.
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Date: 11/6/2010 6:46:00 PM
Now this is awesome, the title had me wondering. the ending is perfect, what one longs for or not. Enjoyed your poem. have a nice one,, time too ooooo go read myself a rap,,, curios what it shall look like in a poem. don't read many of them on here.... bye,..p.d.
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Date: 11/6/2010 6:33:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your works....you have alot of talent!!
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