A Letter To Mr Frost

A Letter to Mr. Frost


I walked again with Mr. Frost
‘cross dew dampened lea
quietly gave thanks to him
just for inviting me.

I gazed at leaf and tree and limb
the beauty that he saw in them
resembling lovers, children, dreams
serenaded by clear pastured streams.

I skipped through fields
followed footprints bolder
down hardscrabbled paths
past boulder on boulder.

We stood in the cold
lonely darkness in white
dreading the miles
left to travel that night.

We took the less traveled
so that we could seek
the duplicitous meaning
of that tongue in his cheek.

John G. Lawless
5/29/2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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July 14, 2014 at 10:47 PM
John,, I'm passing by to say hi, and thank you for the reply, you left on the comment I left below... XOX~ LINDA
Sirak Avatar
June 26, 2014 at 6:56 AM
Thank you for entering my contest with this unique poem that reflects the simple beauty in words, in life, that Frost was known for.
Lawless Avatar
June 26, 2014 at 7:04 AM
My Pleasure Monterey, and thank you for taking the time to run a contest, read and evaluate all the poems submitted, and "Prompt" the muse to wander outside the box. John
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June 25, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I have not read the works of Robert Frost, but he sounds like an interesting poet to discover.... The imagery in this poem is really beautiful, and the words flow so smoothly. Congratulations on your win with this great write, John!
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June 25, 2014 at 7:57 AM
Kelly, a lot of Frost's works are about the seemingly simple and mundane things and situations of life. IHMO there is much insight, and "tongue in cheekiness" to be found there also. Thanks for you kind comments.
Kendrick Avatar
June 23, 2014 at 4:54 PM
This is awesome work!! No wonder it is in the winners’ list..Sara
Lawless Avatar
June 25, 2014 at 7:55 AM
Sara, thank you again for reading and commenting on my work, always appreciated.
Lindley Avatar
June 22, 2014 at 12:54 PM
Congrats on a fine win!!!! This write is a fantastic tribute. BBBravooooo
Lawless Avatar
June 25, 2014 at 7:53 AM
Thank you Robert, for the Bravo!! Sometimes these contest make one feel that they are in the center of the ring.
A   Avatar
June 21, 2014 at 10:32 PM
sweet win...Linda
Lawless Avatar
June 25, 2014 at 7:52 AM
PD, I thought we broke up??? Thanks for reading and commenting.
Sietesantos Avatar
June 21, 2014 at 2:33 PM
Hi John, please accept my congratulations on another well-deserved win! I think Mr. Frost would appreciate this great, clever write! Bravo, my friend!
Lawless Avatar
June 25, 2014 at 7:51 AM
I think Mr. Frost was a very clever fellow himself as I find many "tongue in cheek" moments in his poetry. Thank you for checking in, always appreciated.
Mehta Avatar
June 20, 2014 at 11:05 PM
Congratulation on a great win on the theme of Letters to poet, john
Lawless Avatar
June 25, 2014 at 7:48 AM
Thank You
Dietrich Avatar
May 29, 2014 at 10:57 PM
wow, John. this is an incredible one for mr. Frost. WELL DONE!!!
Lawless Avatar
May 30, 2014 at 7:02 PM
Andrea, thanks for your kind words. Mr. Frost says to say hello.
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